for The Power of the Magi9/11/2017 c7 DragonTamer01
As I said in a previous review, I really hope this story hasn't been abandoned.
As I said in a previous review, I really hope this story hasn't been abandoned.
9/22/2015 c7 Bronze
What a loss for Fanfiction. This story was going so good then it simply died. It's been seven years since you last updated this and that's just sad. I wish, if you read this, that you'd review what you've written, maybe rewrite it but definitely finish it.
What a loss for Fanfiction. This story was going so good then it simply died. It's been seven years since you last updated this and that's just sad. I wish, if you read this, that you'd review what you've written, maybe rewrite it but definitely finish it.
9/22/2015 c6 Bronze
Pinky and The Brain. You MUST be a fan of Pinky at least! And a more fitting end for a bigoted, self-centered, egotistical, violent, obnoxious, abusive and greedy person there never was.
Pinky and The Brain. You MUST be a fan of Pinky at least! And a more fitting end for a bigoted, self-centered, egotistical, violent, obnoxious, abusive and greedy person there never was.
3/8/2015 c3 KrisB-71854
The chapter it self was fine. I think that your formatting got screwed up when you uploaded it to ff though. It is just missing paragraph breaks. It's one of those little things that ruins the flow.
Walls of text without breaks are bad for readability
The chapter it self was fine. I think that your formatting got screwed up when you uploaded it to ff though. It is just missing paragraph breaks. It's one of those little things that ruins the flow.
Walls of text without breaks are bad for readability
5/12/2014 c1 Guest
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6/4/2013 c7 gaschalk
Harry was 15 months old not 13 as stated on the night his parents were attacked. You should reread over this chapter and correct several mistakes. Nice writing though, I just read the story so far and enjoyed it. A bit sorry there has been no updates in a long time. It looks like you have given this story up. Too bad
Stan
Harry was 15 months old not 13 as stated on the night his parents were attacked. You should reread over this chapter and correct several mistakes. Nice writing though, I just read the story so far and enjoyed it. A bit sorry there has been no updates in a long time. It looks like you have given this story up. Too bad
Stan
1/9/2012 c7 
3aderrett
this is a really good story and its a shame that you have not up dated in a while
3aderrettthis is a really good story and its a shame that you have not up dated in a while
8/25/2011 c1 2samaelfell
Hello just figured i'd comment on this in the hope that you haven't completely abandoned this story or that by reviewing I might bring you back to writing. Now to review the story (I've read all posted but figured id just review the first chapter and let it stand for all the current ones) it was a rather refreshing take on the time travel genre of fanfics since you may have made harry more or less all powerful and very smart but you gave him limits and reasons for the above and didn't make some major change in him such as suddenly being 5 foot muscle bound super man considering he's only 11 you remember to keep him that way physically. So all in all I'm rather impressed with your constant umm I cant think of a word for the situation hehehe but the point is you remember to keep it fitting the time age and story line you dont suddenly change direction or cause sudden inconsistencies with previously stated subjects. SO hopefully you'll come back and finish while keeping with your current umm my vocabulary sucks at the moment from lack of sleep... OH I remember the word i wanted hehehe. Keep your current quality of writing. ya now that i wrote an essay for a review im done.
2samaelfellHello just figured i'd comment on this in the hope that you haven't completely abandoned this story or that by reviewing I might bring you back to writing. Now to review the story (I've read all posted but figured id just review the first chapter and let it stand for all the current ones) it was a rather refreshing take on the time travel genre of fanfics since you may have made harry more or less all powerful and very smart but you gave him limits and reasons for the above and didn't make some major change in him such as suddenly being 5 foot muscle bound super man considering he's only 11 you remember to keep him that way physically. So all in all I'm rather impressed with your constant umm I cant think of a word for the situation hehehe but the point is you remember to keep it fitting the time age and story line you dont suddenly change direction or cause sudden inconsistencies with previously stated subjects. SO hopefully you'll come back and finish while keeping with your current umm my vocabulary sucks at the moment from lack of sleep... OH I remember the word i wanted hehehe. Keep your current quality of writing. ya now that i wrote an essay for a review im done.
8/10/2010 c7 4darkplayer35
Very interesting story. I look forward to reading more. Please update soon.
4darkplayer35Very interesting story. I look forward to reading more. Please update soon.
5/21/2010 c7 3WhiteElfElder
Good story so far, I always enjoy a bit of Dumbledore roasting. With all of Harry's powers, is he able to change his appearance like Tonks?
3WhiteElfElderGood story so far, I always enjoy a bit of Dumbledore roasting. With all of Harry's powers, is he able to change his appearance like Tonks?
11/15/2009 c7 loretta537
this is a great story, I hope you continue it. I would love to see how things change with a harry that has two lifetimes of memory and knowledge that so many others don’t
this is a great story, I hope you continue it. I would love to see how things change with a harry that has two lifetimes of memory and knowledge that so many others don’t