1/6/2010 c3 27EdeatheDemonFox
Wow, this is amazing! You are truly a talented writer and the song you wrote is amazing. Love it.~
Wow, this is amazing! You are truly a talented writer and the song you wrote is amazing. Love it.~
12/26/2006 c12 5XxboredxX
cool story! but sad anding... HATE SAD ENDINGS! At least there is a sequel. that way I know Rae won't be dead...
cool story! but sad anding... HATE SAD ENDINGS! At least there is a sequel. that way I know Rae won't be dead...
12/20/2006 c12 o0o0oo0
Rain, you idiot! Don't DIE!
Nice chapter, and good job on a story well done! I can't wait to read Learning to Live. I wonder what'll happen... But man! This cliffhanger is just... ah! Very well done, but it's still really mean!
Good luck on the rest of your exams.
-SA
Rain, you idiot! Don't DIE!
Nice chapter, and good job on a story well done! I can't wait to read Learning to Live. I wonder what'll happen... But man! This cliffhanger is just... ah! Very well done, but it's still really mean!
Good luck on the rest of your exams.
-SA
12/19/2006 c12 2LoveSickZombie
YAY! I GET A COOKIE! i wont kill YOU. ill kill ME. ok? good plan? yes. ok.
YAY! I GET A COOKIE! i wont kill YOU. ill kill ME. ok? good plan? yes. ok.
12/16/2006 c11 lyokofan30
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! This is a great story I want to see it contiuned!
-lyokofan30-
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! This is a great story I want to see it contiuned!
-lyokofan30-
12/16/2006 c11 o0o0oo0
A little more detail might've been helpful with this chapter, but in all it was good. Rain really needs to open up, though.
Ok, what the heck happened to Odd and Jim?
Poll Answer: If you have a solid plot and are really dedicated to this story, then by all means, go for the sequal. But I just want you to know that not everyone that reads this will read the sequal. I know from experience. It looks like you have a lot of readers, so I doubt you should have any problem.
If you're confident enough, go for it!
Looking forward to the next update!
-SA
A little more detail might've been helpful with this chapter, but in all it was good. Rain really needs to open up, though.
Ok, what the heck happened to Odd and Jim?
Poll Answer: If you have a solid plot and are really dedicated to this story, then by all means, go for the sequal. But I just want you to know that not everyone that reads this will read the sequal. I know from experience. It looks like you have a lot of readers, so I doubt you should have any problem.
If you're confident enough, go for it!
Looking forward to the next update!
-SA
12/16/2006 c11 2LoveSickZombie
YAY! i get a cookie! can i have a sugar cookie with lotsa frosting and sprinkles? no chocolate in it? ew Chocolate...lol. um SEQUAL! NOW! lol. jk. lol.plz dont make Rain die. If u did, that would happen in 2 of the stories im reading. the main character in that one too died. i started crying. dont make me cry!
YAY! i get a cookie! can i have a sugar cookie with lotsa frosting and sprinkles? no chocolate in it? ew Chocolate...lol. um SEQUAL! NOW! lol. jk. lol.plz dont make Rain die. If u did, that would happen in 2 of the stories im reading. the main character in that one too died. i started crying. dont make me cry!
11/11/2006 c10 3DancerTillIDie
i really love your story! sorry i havent updated before, its just i update after i read the last posed chapter. to answer your question, i think you should keep Rain, but make it so that the group keeps a close eye on her. have something happen, like a XANA attack where odd gets hurt. then with irrashinal think, attempt suicide again with the excuse where odd got hurt, she thinks its all her fault. she doesnt want to sit around and wait for someone else to get hurt, or worse. just my opinion, EMAIL AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! by the way, this story is favorited on my account and so are you... YAY!
i really love your story! sorry i havent updated before, its just i update after i read the last posed chapter. to answer your question, i think you should keep Rain, but make it so that the group keeps a close eye on her. have something happen, like a XANA attack where odd gets hurt. then with irrashinal think, attempt suicide again with the excuse where odd got hurt, she thinks its all her fault. she doesnt want to sit around and wait for someone else to get hurt, or worse. just my opinion, EMAIL AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! by the way, this story is favorited on my account and so are you... YAY!
9/19/2006 c10 TELL ME WHAT TO DO
wow that was a really good story. i was about to like die when she was talking about killing herself. i was like no! well good story.
much love
MOPA
wow that was a really good story. i was about to like die when she was talking about killing herself. i was like no! well good story.
much love
MOPA
9/1/2006 c1 TELL ME WHAT TO DO
ok i really want to read the next chapters but guess what suposelly the url is outdated. w/e i will find out a way to get it. good story so far that i CAN read.
much love
MOPA
ok i really want to read the next chapters but guess what suposelly the url is outdated. w/e i will find out a way to get it. good story so far that i CAN read.
much love
MOPA
7/29/2006 c10 anomynus
IF YOU KILL RAIN I'LL STRANGLE YOU!
IF YOU KILL RAIN I'LL STRANGLE YOU!
7/5/2006 c10 2LoveSickZombie
i dont want her to die. i count as 500 votes. lol. all for her not dying. ok.
i dont want her to die. i count as 500 votes. lol. all for her not dying. ok.
7/4/2006 c10 Gregoryhell
nice chapter, and don't make another drama, and let her live! and update please soon
nice chapter, and don't make another drama, and let her live! and update please soon