for Love Always8/22/2006 c1 lebredonyahoo.com
That was a sad story, I cried cause I needed to cry and that did it a I feel so good.
AKS,
92
That was a sad story, I cried cause I needed to cry and that did it a I feel so good.
AKS,
92
6/12/2006 c1 
3macyluvsu
Aw, poor Elliot :D This is such a great story! I'm glad he's looking at Olivia's death with a more positive note, kinda like, I'll meet you in the after-life or something along those lines. Once again, great story! :)
3macyluvsuAw, poor Elliot :D This is such a great story! I'm glad he's looking at Olivia's death with a more positive note, kinda like, I'll meet you in the after-life or something along those lines. Once again, great story! :)
4/11/2006 c1 89Kelly of the midnight dawn
Oh my God that was so sad but it was really well written. I would leave it as just a oneshot though because what more can Elliot do and what more would we want him to do than pine over losing Olivia. Of course he could always go find another woman but then I would send you a review that might look something like this
"And you call yourself a shipper? How dare you! How dare you have him fall in love with anyone else. I hope this new woman falls off a cliff or gets hit by a car or something because she's not Olivia and she will always have my never ending hatred"
LOL well that's how mean I would probably be if that happened LOL
This is a really great story. It is very sad though. Might I suggest that you try your hand at some good ole EO fluffiness or some angstyfluff or some non-deathfic angst that eventually ends romantically for the two of them or something that starts off really fluffy and then gets angsty in the middle and then when things are starting to get fluffy again it gets really angsty but by the end of the story its fluffy again. LOL well I should stop giving you all these crazy suggestions.
If you ever want to talk, my AIM is in my profile
Hope to hear from you soon
Elliot and Olivia for Eternity
Merry Shipper Christmas
Watch out for Furbies they're evil!
-Kelly
89Kelly of the midnight dawnOh my God that was so sad but it was really well written. I would leave it as just a oneshot though because what more can Elliot do and what more would we want him to do than pine over losing Olivia. Of course he could always go find another woman but then I would send you a review that might look something like this
"And you call yourself a shipper? How dare you! How dare you have him fall in love with anyone else. I hope this new woman falls off a cliff or gets hit by a car or something because she's not Olivia and she will always have my never ending hatred"
LOL well that's how mean I would probably be if that happened LOL
This is a really great story. It is very sad though. Might I suggest that you try your hand at some good ole EO fluffiness or some angstyfluff or some non-deathfic angst that eventually ends romantically for the two of them or something that starts off really fluffy and then gets angsty in the middle and then when things are starting to get fluffy again it gets really angsty but by the end of the story its fluffy again. LOL well I should stop giving you all these crazy suggestions.
If you ever want to talk, my AIM is in my profile
Hope to hear from you soon
Elliot and Olivia for Eternity
Merry Shipper Christmas
Watch out for Furbies they're evil!
-Kelly
4/3/2006 c1 12MY-LOVE-IS-STRONG
I like it very much, and you should write more one-shots, and or stories with many chapters.
12MY-LOVE-IS-STRONGI like it very much, and you should write more one-shots, and or stories with many chapters.
3/17/2006 c1 14kwebba
omg i was seriously about to cry, but i didnt cuz im at my friends but this is SO GOOD! u should write more like these and stuff like that... so yea...
14kwebbaomg i was seriously about to cry, but i didnt cuz im at my friends but this is SO GOOD! u should write more like these and stuff like that... so yea...
3/15/2006 c1 jeannine
I loved it. Looks like I have a very talented daughter. I knew that now everyone else does.
I loved it. Looks like I have a very talented daughter. I knew that now everyone else does.
3/15/2006 c1 Svu Cutie
I think unless liv can return it should stay one chapter... It was so sad i cried!
I think unless liv can return it should stay one chapter... It was so sad i cried!
3/14/2006 c1 chloe
you should go on and tell how olivia died and stuff. It is a really good start but very sad! I think you should do at least four more chapters.
you should go on and tell how olivia died and stuff. It is a really good start but very sad! I think you should do at least four more chapters.
3/14/2006 c1 jorge
that was wonderful. never read a better story.
that was wonderful. never read a better story.