
4/9/2016 c1
6ExtremeSManpig
Short and simple, it's good, and I really like it. One of the first Deltora quest fanfictions that didn't deviate too much from the original feel of the series. This I assume is just a simple reflection of Jarred after he regained his memory. Small, yet effective. I like it.

Short and simple, it's good, and I really like it. One of the first Deltora quest fanfictions that didn't deviate too much from the original feel of the series. This I assume is just a simple reflection of Jarred after he regained his memory. Small, yet effective. I like it.
12/5/2006 c1 Sapphire91
oh, that was so sweet, it was really touching and it was short but to the point, it was great. 9 out of 10
oh, that was so sweet, it was really touching and it was short but to the point, it was great. 9 out of 10
5/30/2006 c1
8Twinado
Bit short...
Your talking about Doom, right? The boy is Dain and the girl Jasmine?

Bit short...
Your talking about Doom, right? The boy is Dain and the girl Jasmine?
3/17/2006 c1 Obsidian Crystal
I liked this, it was interesting.
I liked this, it was interesting.