9/13/2017 c1 COFFEE QUEEN 17
Wish there was more.

4/16/2008 c2 alex
I like your story, you did a good job, i love your way of writing despite the few gram. mistakes.. but, hey! errare humanum est!

I must add that the relationship between the characters develops TOO fast, and they seem "fake" and flat as well as the story

p.s. don't be mad at me but I think they could have chosen better dares than smell each other's armpit/foot...although it may be funny I reckon that's not very smart..normal people would never do something similar! and neither and Rory nor tris would EVeR do it in the show...

anyway, keep writing and improving because I'm sure you'll get really far!

6/4/2007 c5 10four51
Love it. Also, great music taste. Love Aqualung and Coldplay. (I just started reading the whole thing today, so that's why I haven't said it earlier.) So, yeah. Update.

4/1/2007 c5 14curlyk03
I like it a lot! Update soon!

3/22/2007 c5 melako17
great.love it

3/22/2007 c5 1Curley-Q
Very cute story, please continue

3/22/2007 c5 OTHlover04
this is good:)