for Love and life6/14/2006 c12 
2TimeIncursion
Congrats on completing your first Chobits fic! All in all I liked it, had a great story behind it and it flowed rather nicely.
Thumbs up, right on! Now on to the next fic ^_^
2TimeIncursionCongrats on completing your first Chobits fic! All in all I liked it, had a great story behind it and it flowed rather nicely.
Thumbs up, right on! Now on to the next fic ^_^
6/8/2006 c11 3DarkEcho-in-the-sky
the intre story was fare superier than any thing i could come up with but you may wont to read my story some thing in it may help you when my 6th chapter comes out from my own screawtiny i dont spell to good and my grammer sucks, but i truely loved you story.
3DarkEcho-in-the-skythe intre story was fare superier than any thing i could come up with but you may wont to read my story some thing in it may help you when my 6th chapter comes out from my own screawtiny i dont spell to good and my grammer sucks, but i truely loved you story.
4/7/2006 c6 TimeIncursion
I'm guessing that the readers (and the author) are waiting for my review, heh.
I like it.
Having Reia work at a school works excellent. Since I am continuing the story, I will probably catch up to your timeline and I will definitely have to work that in there.
Politics? Now that'll be fun.
All in all a good chapter, and I can see where you are headed with the story. Keep it rockin!
I'm guessing that the readers (and the author) are waiting for my review, heh.
I like it.
Having Reia work at a school works excellent. Since I am continuing the story, I will probably catch up to your timeline and I will definitely have to work that in there.
Politics? Now that'll be fun.
All in all a good chapter, and I can see where you are headed with the story. Keep it rockin!
4/1/2006 c5 TimeIncursion
Still going strong! The only thing I will point out is that it's spelled 'terabyte'. Not very important, just being a bit of a pain, heh.
Anyway, it's turning out good!
Still going strong! The only thing I will point out is that it's spelled 'terabyte'. Not very important, just being a bit of a pain, heh.
Anyway, it's turning out good!
3/27/2006 c4 TimeIncursion
Looking good! You've got the start of a good character happening. Let's see what the next update brings!
Looking good! You've got the start of a good character happening. Let's see what the next update brings!
3/19/2006 c2 8Secuencias
It is good history, but, very short well. I will continue it reading.
Greetings or Loves!
PS. Sorry for my bad english, but I'm Mexican
8SecuenciasIt is good history, but, very short well. I will continue it reading.
Greetings or Loves!
PS. Sorry for my bad english, but I'm Mexican