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7/11/2006 c1 Newsiefreak172
... it was okay. if you were to continue i would most likely read it.
3/19/2006 c1 3Sugarhighbob
OMG I loved it. Please continue. i saw you say something about your stories on Gaia, and I had to check them out to see if they were any good and they are!
3/17/2006 c1 Yo
Yeah, I agree that Roger would be more distraught. The last line irked me, too: "You disgust me." It's a fairly unemotional thing to say to your dead girlfriend's dealer (the line "You'll never lack for customers" in the play always annoys me, too). I like your story, though. It seems like it should continue...
3/16/2006 c1 anon
Pretty good, except you need to proof-read. I think Roger would have broken down more too... otherwise, I like it!
3/16/2006 c1 Jaclyn
OMG, that would be such a sad ending! It is really amazing and quite creative, but the fact the mimi survives is what raises the spirit. The second half is already so sad as it is. But it is really creative and it is also seems like it is possible. Good Job Ducky!

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