for Skeleton in the Long Black Coat12/7/2006 c1 
17firedraygon
Oh my gosh, this is brilliant. The use of 'skeleton grin' and Jack's voice and Timothy's problems - hee, this fic is so much love. It would be awesome if you continued with this idea. XD Please write more soon!
~firedraygon97
17firedraygonOh my gosh, this is brilliant. The use of 'skeleton grin' and Jack's voice and Timothy's problems - hee, this fic is so much love. It would be awesome if you continued with this idea. XD Please write more soon!
~firedraygon97
5/7/2006 c1 just some weirdo
Yeah, this is cute.
Yeah, this is cute.
4/23/2006 c1 4Black Thorned Rose
Love it! Humorous ending. I love how you portray the views of Halloween Town and its residents so well.
~Black Thorned Rose
4Black Thorned RoseLove it! Humorous ending. I love how you portray the views of Halloween Town and its residents so well.
~Black Thorned Rose
4/13/2006 c1 Megan
Ha that was cool , i didnt see that coming !
Ha that was cool , i didnt see that coming !
4/6/2006 c1 22Nancy T
Really well done, funny and well written all the way through, building to a wonderfully amusing twist end! What fun!
22Nancy TReally well done, funny and well written all the way through, building to a wonderfully amusing twist end! What fun!
4/4/2006 c1 Stephanie
this is cute
this is cute
3/27/2006 c1 GoldDuelist
I don't think you actually got the original idea across. Your summery suggested he was going to put on bright happy colors and scare his parents out of their minds. Otherwise you had a great opening. The first paragraph was perfect. You did a great job showing us the character background.
I don't think you actually got the original idea across. Your summery suggested he was going to put on bright happy colors and scare his parents out of their minds. Otherwise you had a great opening. The first paragraph was perfect. You did a great job showing us the character background.
3/20/2006 c1 6Moonliterider
hm... u should give a little more background on the Skellington children...
6Moonliteriderhm... u should give a little more background on the Skellington children...