for Truly Complete5/5/2012 c1 
9The Storyteller of Old
beautiful...you truly captured what every fan wants from Sesshomaru, and in only a few words, surprisingly from a poem so short I really enjoyed it. So, this is what people call short&sweet.
9The Storyteller of Oldbeautiful...you truly captured what every fan wants from Sesshomaru, and in only a few words, surprisingly from a poem so short I really enjoyed it. So, this is what people call short&sweet.
7/17/2007 c1 nejilover
that was interresting.
that was interresting.
5/14/2006 c1 shaded shadows
this is the first time i've ever read something so short and liked it. good job
this is the first time i've ever read something so short and liked it. good job
5/11/2006 c1 6Kawaii girl 4 life
That peom was good but it can be better,so yea do what you do best!
Ja Ne! ^_^
6Kawaii girl 4 lifeThat peom was good but it can be better,so yea do what you do best!
Ja Ne! ^_^
5/1/2006 c1 1bluejinnjinn
I sorta like your poem, yet I'd rather read a story based on your poem it would sound much cooler
1bluejinnjinnI sorta like your poem, yet I'd rather read a story based on your poem it would sound much cooler
4/26/2006 c1 6Deadly Regret
I enjoyed it. It was sweet. These would have to be my favorite two lines because they best describe Sesshomaru's and Kagome's relationship:
My un-denying love for you is sinful
Our bodies are joined in a sinful matrimony
6Deadly RegretI enjoyed it. It was sweet. These would have to be my favorite two lines because they best describe Sesshomaru's and Kagome's relationship:
My un-denying love for you is sinful
Our bodies are joined in a sinful matrimony
4/8/2006 c1 2blackrose8666
that was differnt i like the poem it was sweet and had a small lemon keep it up
2blackrose8666that was differnt i like the poem it was sweet and had a small lemon keep it up
3/26/2006 c1 1Ukiyo
I thought I would comment...
I really adore your wording
of this poem. Continue with
such great work.
1UkiyoI thought I would comment...
I really adore your wording
of this poem. Continue with
such great work.
3/26/2006 c1 sessygrl06
okay
okay
3/22/2006 c1 6sessmaruspunk
I LOVE THAT ENDING. oh OH and i like the part where it saids in a sinful matrimony gotta love that part. real awsome can't wait till the next one. cya ~maru out~
6sessmaruspunkI LOVE THAT ENDING. oh OH and i like the part where it saids in a sinful matrimony gotta love that part. real awsome can't wait till the next one. cya ~maru out~
3/22/2006 c1 1otfreakingp
Ooh, cool! This is so neat! I really like it alot! I don't think I've ever read a poem with a lemon in it before! ^_^
*Favorites*
~Aangsair~
1otfreakingpOoh, cool! This is so neat! I really like it alot! I don't think I've ever read a poem with a lemon in it before! ^_^
*Favorites*
~Aangsair~
3/22/2006 c1 Jill K
Wow! Really romantic and pretty! ~_^
Wow! Really romantic and pretty! ~_^