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1/17/2012 c1 James
Pretty good could be longer
6/26/2011 c1 Emily
Very good right more!
2/26/2009 c1 fhfhfhhhrh
I love this couple! Nice one-shot! Very good!
2/18/2009 c1 eb
...kerrys not like that,she'd kick his head in,but still good.plz make it longer
5/6/2008 c1 BeautifulButDeadly
why even write it..
3/15/2008 c1 Marial79
lol...if i was james i would not be able to suppress my laughter let alone when im myself
10/10/2007 c1 Harry Rickards
Good mini-story. I've posted it on cherubfanfic. Could be a little bit longer (maybe another paragraph)
5/10/2007 c1 Anon
I dont mean to be eusw, but

WHAT THE HELL?

that SUCKED LIKE HELL

when would Kerry EVER do that? That is the stupidest thing i have ever read

the title describes the story - PATHETIC

Have a nice day

Anony
11/22/2006 c1 Cynical Reveiwer
This isn't too bad, but not very good either. Not at all like Robert Muchamore, but that doesn't matter. Better than many Cherub Fanfics, sweet and snappy, a good short story. But it is out of character for Kerry to run up to James and just hug him. There should've been an awkward moment, or a mroe Kerry-like attitude.
10/31/2006 c1 79KrisEleven
Cute. You kept to the characters. I'd like to see longer works, too, though.
10/11/2006 c1 3I'm No One
That was the most toughing story I have ver read! Props yo!
8/5/2006 c1 Em
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG ITZ SO GOOD! U HAV 2 WRITE MORE! plz plz plz plz

u r as gud as robert muchamore! :)
6/23/2006 c1 135Faramirlover
Aw! So brillo pad.
6/12/2006 c1 chitoryu12
Meh. Way too short, nothing but Kerry spontaneously hugging James. I felt no emotion whatsoever.
4/19/2006 c1 TooSweet4Words
oh yes, very mini. very sweet and fluffy and cute. just like fairyfloss.
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