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1/31/2007 c1 Jessica Figueroa
It was really good. I really loved it
4/8/2006 c1 ElmGold
nice job!
4/2/2006 c1 9xx.faith
uhm...it was ok but lots of spelling errors and grammar mistakes made it very hard to follow. maybe you could read it over and see if you could fix some of it...
3/25/2006 c1 15Matt and T.K
what is the name of the song and who is it buy?-Matt
3/24/2006 c1 243Dustbunny3
Your summary made my head hurt. I have no idea what it's trying to say.

The fic itself is very much the same. The mechanics and formatting are hard to follow. I have very little idea what the heck is happening. I'm also left wondering who this "Hinta" person is. I'm sure that you could write a nice story if you put to it, but this is just... I don't know what this is.

Back-track and try again. You'll get it
3/24/2006 c1 00
umm yeah i didnt read =P

just wanted to say that summary has A LOT od typos

that just IRKED the hell outta me ?

moroning? or mourning?

ahahah sry its no offense just wanted to bring to ur attention

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