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4/15/2018 c3 ClaireR89
Revan's mask was demonic?
When did Revan get brown eyes?
2/22/2018 c6 4Azrael's Son
holy crap this is a awesome story. aside from slight spelling errors really damned good i hope you make a sequel.
1/31/2018 c8 noxenrom
Your writing skills are abysmal
1/1/2018 c3 samics
There are so many inconsistencies in this story. Characters' ages jump all over the place, Harry and Bastilla kiss one second and then act like strangers the next, there are no transitions from one scene to the otheronly abrupt jumps, contradictions with what you have wrote yourself, the mostly okay grammar gets so bad in places that it feels like the writer was changed for those few sentences.
12/31/2017 c28 8acquiringwriter
Very nice! I hope you post a new chapter here to alert us if you plan to start posting a sequel. I'm putting this story on alert for that reason.
12/27/2017 c14 Six Foot Assassin
Completely messed up Revan's character. People who don't know how to write certain character should stay away from doing so.
12/20/2017 c14 SantoryuSekai
I have to ask, why do not you use the various abilities of the dark side and the side of light? has many interesting and powerful skills example:
In darkside of force
Alter Reality
Consume Essence
Mind Shard
Force phantom
Force rage
Force drain
Deadly Sight
Force net
Force Slow
Force storm (wormhole)
Force storm (weather)
Dark illusion
Force Destruction
Jedi powers
Flashburn
Force Body
Force Enlightenment
Force ghost
Force healing[1]
Force speed
Force stealth
Force Listening
Force Smell
Force meld
Force sense
Precognition
Battle Precognition
Shatterpoint
Psychometry
Force empathy
Farsight
Force sight
Force vision
12/20/2017 c8 SantoryuSekai
Why does Revan not destroy death eaters in a few seconds? if he is so strong when Revan of the expanded Universe, his power reaches the planetary level, a person who destroys continents with the force. would think and crush them easily.
Force lightning already killed all 1 hit
just wanted to know if this Revan is as overpower as the real one.
7/30/2017 c28 XXsupremexxDARKLORDxxDAVID1196
gg i like it
7/19/2017 c26 TheApatheticOne
Pathetic! Why does he puts up with those insect's demands when he could crush them and take what he wants easily!? Weak and pathetic, there is no need to negociate with those weaker than you.
7/19/2017 c14 TheApatheticOne
That's what happens when you let the power of the dark side slip from your grasp. He is pathetic. :(
5/12/2017 c9 Mr.Heller
Aaaaaand it turned to shit...
5/10/2017 c28 4kossboss
Amazing well done hopefully there is a sequel?
4/27/2017 c28 adam
loved it thanks for the amazing story
3/30/2017 c28 ak
bonne fic!
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