
3/31/2006 c2 Miako
Damn, the botched assassination scene was awesome, but was Naruto's action an accident or did it just seem accidental? Personally, I'm leaning on the latter.
Damn, the botched assassination scene was awesome, but was Naruto's action an accident or did it just seem accidental? Personally, I'm leaning on the latter.
3/31/2006 c2 West Wall Gate Guard
I think this story is illegaly awesome...it powns hard core UPDATE SOON
I think this story is illegaly awesome...it powns hard core UPDATE SOON
3/31/2006 c2
1Dracowar
Great Update, i almost feel like Naruto is like Wolverine or some other hidden hero who never gets recognition. Are you gonna have Akira confront naruto?

Great Update, i almost feel like Naruto is like Wolverine or some other hidden hero who never gets recognition. Are you gonna have Akira confront naruto?
3/31/2006 c2 Scar
Wow, I didn't except you to update so soon and please let Naruto and Akira meet ^^
Please continue!
Wow, I didn't except you to update so soon and please let Naruto and Akira meet ^^
Please continue!
3/30/2006 c1 Marine
rather interesting i look forward to updates
rather interesting i look forward to updates
3/30/2006 c1
1Dracowar
Holy crap! Can you add some Full Metal Alchemist ideas? The world of the future of the Five Elemental Countries have become the world of FMA.
I hope you continue and update.

Holy crap! Can you add some Full Metal Alchemist ideas? The world of the future of the Five Elemental Countries have become the world of FMA.
I hope you continue and update.
3/30/2006 c1 Scar
Wow! This is really original considering all there is these days are badly written fanfictions _ Please continue this, I would like to see more of your story ^^
Wow! This is really original considering all there is these days are badly written fanfictions _ Please continue this, I would like to see more of your story ^^