for What Might Be5/29/2014 c5 
1NyxEclipse88
I love this story.
It's great! Not draggy at all and it gets the story across with so few words! (well, in comparison to those epic length stories that die halfway and well, doesn't get no story across) I seriously need to learn that writing style since I can't write long stories...
I agree with the 'Naruto helps from the shadows' idea though. We get to see Naruto's awesomeness without the story becoming annoying with him outright smashing all his enemies away.
I know it's unlikely to happen...but can I beg for a sequel? :3
1NyxEclipse88I love this story.
It's great! Not draggy at all and it gets the story across with so few words! (well, in comparison to those epic length stories that die halfway and well, doesn't get no story across) I seriously need to learn that writing style since I can't write long stories...
I agree with the 'Naruto helps from the shadows' idea though. We get to see Naruto's awesomeness without the story becoming annoying with him outright smashing all his enemies away.
I know it's unlikely to happen...but can I beg for a sequel? :3
9/15/2013 c5 Silent Avid Magma
I read this on another website years and years ago but lost the URL. I'm glad I found it here.
Thanks for writing.
-Silence
I read this on another website years and years ago but lost the URL. I'm glad I found it here.
Thanks for writing.
-Silence
6/22/2013 c5 DarkthShadow
This is a good story, I hope that you are still writing this. Cant wait to read more either.
This is a good story, I hope that you are still writing this. Cant wait to read more either.
1/15/2013 c5 9Ao yuki
I'm not sure what to say, except that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, even if it was written almost seven years ago. It's definitely a fanfic that I'd want to re-read again and again. Awesome job!
9Ao yukiI'm not sure what to say, except that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, even if it was written almost seven years ago. It's definitely a fanfic that I'd want to re-read again and again. Awesome job!
10/28/2012 c5 Guest
love it
love it
10/7/2012 c5 15Burnzs
That was great! I really enjoyed reading it. It was cool that he used a letter to communicate in the end and I thought it was awesome that he was the kage the whole time. It was great. Absolutely brilliant.
15BurnzsThat was great! I really enjoyed reading it. It was cool that he used a letter to communicate in the end and I thought it was awesome that he was the kage the whole time. It was great. Absolutely brilliant.
9/27/2012 c5 Mr. Spooky
this is really good and really deep in some parts keep up the good work
this is really good and really deep in some parts keep up the good work
8/30/2012 c5 Carie Cello
The summary almost made me skip the story and look for another one, but having read other stories of yours, I figured the good writing will make up for the unpleasant feel the summary had given me. In the end, I liked the story in its entirety and now I'm very glad i didn't skip it.
A very unique approach, I liked the even pace because it helped make the story more believable (although I'm wondering how did Naruto manage to remain sane for 3 centuries...or maybe he hasn't). I think your decision to keep Naruto as just a shadow of the past is fitting, not to mention that the ending is open enough to let the reader with the hope that it's not over yet.
Personally I would love to see a sequel in which Naruto learns to live again. Who knows, maybe you'll surprise us once. :)
The summary almost made me skip the story and look for another one, but having read other stories of yours, I figured the good writing will make up for the unpleasant feel the summary had given me. In the end, I liked the story in its entirety and now I'm very glad i didn't skip it.
A very unique approach, I liked the even pace because it helped make the story more believable (although I'm wondering how did Naruto manage to remain sane for 3 centuries...or maybe he hasn't). I think your decision to keep Naruto as just a shadow of the past is fitting, not to mention that the ending is open enough to let the reader with the hope that it's not over yet.
Personally I would love to see a sequel in which Naruto learns to live again. Who knows, maybe you'll surprise us once. :)
6/25/2012 c5 1Narukin
I really enjoyed reading this, it is absolutely breathtaking and wonderfully written.
1NarukinI really enjoyed reading this, it is absolutely breathtaking and wonderfully written.
4/4/2012 c5 dawg3388
hey i see that you are still writing fanfiction and i'm glad i can write this review and you'll see it.
this is a great story and i'm glad i read it. the summary really does not do it justice. the writing style was great. i really liked the time skips and you didn't get bogged down with unnecessary details.
thanks for writing and i look forward to reading your other stories.
hey i see that you are still writing fanfiction and i'm glad i can write this review and you'll see it.
this is a great story and i'm glad i read it. the summary really does not do it justice. the writing style was great. i really liked the time skips and you didn't get bogged down with unnecessary details.
thanks for writing and i look forward to reading your other stories.
9/1/2011 c5 Janelly Slytherin
very deep and beautifully written, i enjoyed seeing naruto and akira's dream come true.
very deep and beautifully written, i enjoyed seeing naruto and akira's dream come true.
7/3/2011 c5 Iryelb
I must say that this is one of my most favored stories I first read this several years ago and I enjoyed it then to but after that I lost it and I would give little searches now and then in some vain attempt to find it again. Im glad I was finally able to find this story again as it was a very good story. I hope you have as much success on everything els as you clearly had on making this wonderfull story.
I must say that this is one of my most favored stories I first read this several years ago and I enjoyed it then to but after that I lost it and I would give little searches now and then in some vain attempt to find it again. Im glad I was finally able to find this story again as it was a very good story. I hope you have as much success on everything els as you clearly had on making this wonderfull story.