for What Might Be5/15/2011 c5 Guest
i remember this story from a year back or so an it was just great good job on the story
i remember this story from a year back or so an it was just great good job on the story
4/19/2011 c5 Nafnlaus
I read this story a year ago, I believe, and I always wanted to read it again. I, presonally, think that this story is very well written an has a very original plotline. However, since I am merely one among the common people, you shouldn't take what I say too seriously.
Anyway, I am very glad to have found this story again because I like the way you portray Naruto in it.
Thank you for writing it, and I hope you will continue to write. Don't let anyone discourage you. It would be quite a loss if you decided to quit writing.
Nafnlaus
I read this story a year ago, I believe, and I always wanted to read it again. I, presonally, think that this story is very well written an has a very original plotline. However, since I am merely one among the common people, you shouldn't take what I say too seriously.
Anyway, I am very glad to have found this story again because I like the way you portray Naruto in it.
Thank you for writing it, and I hope you will continue to write. Don't let anyone discourage you. It would be quite a loss if you decided to quit writing.
Nafnlaus
4/12/2011 c5 adamjb
Great story. I have no problem with the way that you ended it. I think you make a very valid point about power. I'm glad that Naruto found a purpose for living. God Job!
Great story. I have no problem with the way that you ended it. I think you make a very valid point about power. I'm glad that Naruto found a purpose for living. God Job!
3/16/2011 c5 
2CMVreud
damn, have to say you had me hooked in chapter one
and the following are even better
just wanna tell you this now is my personal favorite
the one before was named
Twenty Times Uzumaki Naruto Didn't Die by Kraken's Ghost
but I'm a softie for good Endings ^^
so... good luck, a good muse and enough free time to do what you want and what the reders demand
2CMVreuddamn, have to say you had me hooked in chapter one
and the following are even better
just wanna tell you this now is my personal favorite
the one before was named
Twenty Times Uzumaki Naruto Didn't Die by Kraken's Ghost
but I'm a softie for good Endings ^^
so... good luck, a good muse and enough free time to do what you want and what the reders demand
11/21/2010 c5 6Haruko92
I have to say I love this story, although it made my cry a bit. I enjoyed it greatly. Keep up the good work. :) -haru
6Haruko92I have to say I love this story, although it made my cry a bit. I enjoyed it greatly. Keep up the good work. :) -haru
11/8/2010 c5 anon363
That was lovely. I hope that you might write more similar to this. :) I loved it.
That was lovely. I hope that you might write more similar to this. :) I loved it.
8/29/2010 c1 12Be one with Mother Russia
lol, I just added this to my story alerts... woops! oh wellz, I'm just going to fave it! Ja!
12Be one with Mother Russialol, I just added this to my story alerts... woops! oh wellz, I'm just going to fave it! Ja!
8/16/2010 c5 Anonymous is a pretty bad name
This was really interesting. Even though it was very much AU, I liked it a lot.
I'm going to go rape your profile now... Tah tah
This was really interesting. Even though it was very much AU, I liked it a lot.
I'm going to go rape your profile now... Tah tah
6/8/2010 c5 Sdarian
This was pretty neat. I had also thought that Naruto would teach someone (Akira, random orphan...) to use chakra, maybe bring back the shinobi profession.
Good job on this.
This was pretty neat. I had also thought that Naruto would teach someone (Akira, random orphan...) to use chakra, maybe bring back the shinobi profession.
Good job on this.
4/9/2010 c5 1Mad-Hatter's-Wife
Ah... so cool. Love the beginning, middle, and end. I did want them to meet, but after your comment at the end of the chapter I understand. ... I'm such a hopeless romantic T~T... can't they bumping into one another or something. *Sigh* I'll suffer in silence and be satisfy with the ending. It's been awhile since I read a really good fanfic, plus it Au and OC. Very surprised and impressed.
Well keep writing and I'll keep reading...
And remember have fun. hehe :)
-MHW
1Mad-Hatter's-WifeAh... so cool. Love the beginning, middle, and end. I did want them to meet, but after your comment at the end of the chapter I understand. ... I'm such a hopeless romantic T~T... can't they bumping into one another or something. *Sigh* I'll suffer in silence and be satisfy with the ending. It's been awhile since I read a really good fanfic, plus it Au and OC. Very surprised and impressed.
Well keep writing and I'll keep reading...
And remember have fun. hehe :)
-MHW
12/29/2009 c5 9Toki Mirage
:D Hahahah! That was great! It's too bad they didn't meet, though. But still it was a very interesting story. Thank you!
9Toki Mirage:D Hahahah! That was great! It's too bad they didn't meet, though. But still it was a very interesting story. Thank you!
10/24/2009 c5 AddictedToReading
Wow, this is so amazing. So by Sun Shadow, does Naruto mean like a guard that protects the Chancellor without anyone, even the Chancellor himeself knows about? So does this mean he'll protect ever Chancellor after that, since he's immortal? He could influence all events like a god behind the scenes.
Wow, this is so amazing. So by Sun Shadow, does Naruto mean like a guard that protects the Chancellor without anyone, even the Chancellor himeself knows about? So does this mean he'll protect ever Chancellor after that, since he's immortal? He could influence all events like a god behind the scenes.