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9/27/2009 c5 1Tiara87

What a wonderfully intriguing story, unlike any one beside it. A diamond among coals. A true pleasure to read, in a style I don't see to often with a hand versed in writing afore now, (which is more then I can say for others on this website.)

Please keep writing, for an author as good as this should never have to stop.

Signed, Enna Scarlet Rose.
9/20/2009 c5 4anemix
It's hauntingly sweet, though the beginning is either too unrealistic, or not detailed enough as so to give the air of unrealistically.


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9/7/2009 c5 Angel Is A Centerfold
You know, some of you authors and your stories...

Just don't let a guy do his homework...
8/22/2009 c5 2Brackets
It was different - it was great.

7/14/2009 c5 5xDelta-Ha-chanx
there's a sequel, right? right?
6/29/2009 c5 Just Some Random Dude
You my friend, are brilliant. Barring the few silly mistakes I found but have now forgotten about, your story was perfect. In the sense that it was a good read. I loved the story, and wish it could be expanded to be longer so I could further enjoy it but I know that to make things good a lot have to be short. *sigh* Anyway, I don't have much criticism to give. since I'm not so good at that. I'm just going to mozey my way on over to check out your other stories.
6/19/2009 c5 2A Bibliophile
Nice ending. It gave closure, but left it open to imaginings at the same time.

This tale was very unique. I think it was very well done.
6/19/2009 c3 A Bibliophile
This is such an odd story and so artfully written I am loving reading it.
6/17/2009 c5 shenmi meiren
wow! nice one :]
6/7/2009 c5 Mr Spooky
wow, I loved this story and the way you write. It's awesome. The first chapter almost made me cry; this whole idea and perspective is very, very touching.

It makes me go into an emo mood, but, really, it's been a long time since I've last read something on the net this deep and heartwarming. It's actually a little philosophical. Thanks a lot for this great read. :)

Especially the growth of the boy, you pictured it just right and it hit all the right spots. Once again, write more, and I look forward to reading them!

Lots of love,

Amegawa-chan~ (Yea "Mr Spooky" was for fun :D)
5/31/2009 c5 17AutumnLeaves
You've got a great idea here, I really enjoyed your story, any chance of a sequel?
5/29/2009 c5 12ZeroTheDestroyer
You have given me the inspiration I need to finally start my time travel fic. This is epic.
5/16/2009 c5 25neokid93
WOW. That. Was. Awesome. ^^

Definitely a feel good story
5/3/2009 c5 Yepyep
What and unique story, i really enjoyed reading it.

Although i would have liked more focus on Naruto or ninjas/chakra in general. Its a great story, keep up the awsome work!
5/2/2009 c5 SuperN-Gaspard
This is an absolutely gorgeous story. Loved every moment of it.

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