for What Might Be9/27/2009 c5 
1Tiara87
Wow.
What a wonderfully intriguing story, unlike any one beside it. A diamond among coals. A true pleasure to read, in a style I don't see to often with a hand versed in writing afore now, (which is more then I can say for others on this website.)
Please keep writing, for an author as good as this should never have to stop.
Signed, Enna Scarlet Rose.
1Tiara87Wow.
What a wonderfully intriguing story, unlike any one beside it. A diamond among coals. A true pleasure to read, in a style I don't see to often with a hand versed in writing afore now, (which is more then I can say for others on this website.)
Please keep writing, for an author as good as this should never have to stop.
Signed, Enna Scarlet Rose.
9/20/2009 c5 4anemix
It's hauntingly sweet, though the beginning is either too unrealistic, or not detailed enough as so to give the air of unrealistically.
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BUNNY
4anemixIt's hauntingly sweet, though the beginning is either too unrealistic, or not detailed enough as so to give the air of unrealistically.
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c(")(")
BUNNY
9/7/2009 c5 Angel Is A Centerfold
You know, some of you authors and your stories...
Just don't let a guy do his homework...
You know, some of you authors and your stories...
Just don't let a guy do his homework...
6/29/2009 c5 Just Some Random Dude
You my friend, are brilliant. Barring the few silly mistakes I found but have now forgotten about, your story was perfect. In the sense that it was a good read. I loved the story, and wish it could be expanded to be longer so I could further enjoy it but I know that to make things good a lot have to be short. *sigh* Anyway, I don't have much criticism to give. since I'm not so good at that. I'm just going to mozey my way on over to check out your other stories.
You my friend, are brilliant. Barring the few silly mistakes I found but have now forgotten about, your story was perfect. In the sense that it was a good read. I loved the story, and wish it could be expanded to be longer so I could further enjoy it but I know that to make things good a lot have to be short. *sigh* Anyway, I don't have much criticism to give. since I'm not so good at that. I'm just going to mozey my way on over to check out your other stories.
6/19/2009 c5 2A Bibliophile
Nice ending. It gave closure, but left it open to imaginings at the same time.
This tale was very unique. I think it was very well done.
2A BibliophileNice ending. It gave closure, but left it open to imaginings at the same time.
This tale was very unique. I think it was very well done.
6/7/2009 c5 Mr Spooky
wow, I loved this story and the way you write. It's awesome. The first chapter almost made me cry; this whole idea and perspective is very, very touching.
It makes me go into an emo mood, but, really, it's been a long time since I've last read something on the net this deep and heartwarming. It's actually a little philosophical. Thanks a lot for this great read. :)
Especially the growth of the boy, you pictured it just right and it hit all the right spots. Once again, write more, and I look forward to reading them!
Lots of love,
Amegawa-chan~ (Yea "Mr Spooky" was for fun :D)
wow, I loved this story and the way you write. It's awesome. The first chapter almost made me cry; this whole idea and perspective is very, very touching.
It makes me go into an emo mood, but, really, it's been a long time since I've last read something on the net this deep and heartwarming. It's actually a little philosophical. Thanks a lot for this great read. :)
Especially the growth of the boy, you pictured it just right and it hit all the right spots. Once again, write more, and I look forward to reading them!
Lots of love,
Amegawa-chan~ (Yea "Mr Spooky" was for fun :D)
5/31/2009 c5 17AutumnLeaves
You've got a great idea here, I really enjoyed your story, any chance of a sequel?
You've got a great idea here, I really enjoyed your story, any chance of a sequel?
5/29/2009 c5 12ZeroTheDestroyer
You have given me the inspiration I need to finally start my time travel fic. This is epic.
12ZeroTheDestroyerYou have given me the inspiration I need to finally start my time travel fic. This is epic.
5/3/2009 c5 Yepyep
What and unique story, i really enjoyed reading it.
Although i would have liked more focus on Naruto or ninjas/chakra in general. Its a great story, keep up the awsome work!
What and unique story, i really enjoyed reading it.
Although i would have liked more focus on Naruto or ninjas/chakra in general. Its a great story, keep up the awsome work!