for What Might Be3/21/2007 c5 Shelby Hedegaard-Friend
please make a sequeal for this maybe set Naruto up with Akira's daughter or something
please make a sequeal for this maybe set Naruto up with Akira's daughter or something
2/21/2007 c5 A-man
It was original but I was dissappointed with it.
It was original but I was dissappointed with it.
1/13/2007 c5 Barranca
Wow, this ended on a healthy note. This story was really out there, I salute you for daring to create a world of your own and keeping it in the boundaries of reality. Hopefully the muse strikes you again ;)
Wow, this ended on a healthy note. This story was really out there, I salute you for daring to create a world of your own and keeping it in the boundaries of reality. Hopefully the muse strikes you again ;)
11/19/2006 c5 
4Itallia
Hm...it would be interesting to see Naruto resurrect a ninja village or something, and that would certainly be a purpose in life.
4ItalliaHm...it would be interesting to see Naruto resurrect a ninja village or something, and that would certainly be a purpose in life.
11/19/2006 c4 Itallia
I was wondering when someone was going to attack someone else of importance when the Golden General was gone.
I was wondering when someone was going to attack someone else of importance when the Golden General was gone.
11/19/2006 c3 Itallia
It's strange seeing a ninja in the modern world, and ridiculously easy how he can get around undetected.
It's strange seeing a ninja in the modern world, and ridiculously easy how he can get around undetected.
10/10/2006 c5 1Monkeymandb
what a fantastic fic that was and you could play on a story line thats alitle old by sending naruto back in time to take another chance. that fic would do well since it has a story line to tie into.
1Monkeymandbwhat a fantastic fic that was and you could play on a story line thats alitle old by sending naruto back in time to take another chance. that fic would do well since it has a story line to tie into.
9/24/2006 c5 Kirara Fan
Huh... not a lot of reviews for a story of this calibre, huh? It's 1:30am right now so I'll keep this short. Very, VERY nice story. It was short, sweet and to the point. You have some real talent for righting and I'll be sure to look up some of your other works. Loved the human combustion thing, that was great. So anyway, just wanted to say your story was alwsome and... um... i'm lagging, so yah thanks for the story, one of the finestly crafted stories i've read in a really long time. Hope to review so of your other works. ~Kirara Fan~
Huh... not a lot of reviews for a story of this calibre, huh? It's 1:30am right now so I'll keep this short. Very, VERY nice story. It was short, sweet and to the point. You have some real talent for righting and I'll be sure to look up some of your other works. Loved the human combustion thing, that was great. So anyway, just wanted to say your story was alwsome and... um... i'm lagging, so yah thanks for the story, one of the finestly crafted stories i've read in a really long time. Hope to review so of your other works. ~Kirara Fan~