
4/21/2011 c2
5Eipok
That was really amazing and it's got me super intrigued. I could picture everything in my mind's eye and it was terrifyingly real. Please update soon.

That was really amazing and it's got me super intrigued. I could picture everything in my mind's eye and it was terrifyingly real. Please update soon.
7/17/2010 c1 Eipok
That was really well written. The way you used that waking dream really accentuated the last few sentences. I did feel sad when I finished reading. Great job. You've got yourself a follower.
That was really well written. The way you used that waking dream really accentuated the last few sentences. I did feel sad when I finished reading. Great job. You've got yourself a follower.
4/26/2007 c1
45Master of the Boot
This is a cool story. I haven't seen many from the perspectives of the grunts. Continue and this story may have great potential.
Wort Wort Wort
Master of TEh Boot

This is a cool story. I haven't seen many from the perspectives of the grunts. Continue and this story may have great potential.
Wort Wort Wort
Master of TEh Boot
4/3/2006 c1 Bob 121
That was good! A little short, but good.
That was good! A little short, but good.