for Moths & Butterflies7/2/2013 c1 
2RandyWrites
Aww, again, simply magical. Bittersweet, but magical. Moody, but well written. Poetic, but not too OOC. (Secret, but fun! XD)
I loved the extended metaphor you used, along with the use of other insects (like the wasp metaphor) it really heightened this story & added a whole level of depth to Rob & Rae's relationship to each other. It almost spells it out in clear black and white what Raven was thinking, yet still retains a certain level of mystery to her character.
You have a gift, my friend. I may just have to take a break from my reading list just to see what else you've written! Just... WOW!
2RandyWritesAww, again, simply magical. Bittersweet, but magical. Moody, but well written. Poetic, but not too OOC. (Secret, but fun! XD)
I loved the extended metaphor you used, along with the use of other insects (like the wasp metaphor) it really heightened this story & added a whole level of depth to Rob & Rae's relationship to each other. It almost spells it out in clear black and white what Raven was thinking, yet still retains a certain level of mystery to her character.
You have a gift, my friend. I may just have to take a break from my reading list just to see what else you've written! Just... WOW!
1/25/2011 c1 10Lee Aemilius
I know you've probably long forgotten about this story, but I thought was a great story. Well written.
10Lee AemiliusI know you've probably long forgotten about this story, but I thought was a great story. Well written.
6/21/2007 c1 15Patriot-of-USA
I have always thought Raven to be a poet. And you developed that very well in this story. Raven's words were moving and heartfelt.
I also compliment you on your work of describing Robin through Raven. Robin's cross-character between light and dark is one that I find to be intriuging. He is not dark or light, but right down the middle. You did well on emphisizing that.
I enjoyed Raven's hints at her interest in his independent stance. She gives a tell though that she wants him to be dark at the line "Perhaps you are a moth, like me." She reveals her hope that he may prefer her style life over the traditional, which I personally think he does.
It seems to me that he opens only to Raven, because she understands him better. It's because of their crosses between light and dark that gives them a realistic view of the world is instead of what they wish it was.
So much to be said for a one-shot. You do good work. Keep it up!
15Patriot-of-USAI have always thought Raven to be a poet. And you developed that very well in this story. Raven's words were moving and heartfelt.
I also compliment you on your work of describing Robin through Raven. Robin's cross-character between light and dark is one that I find to be intriuging. He is not dark or light, but right down the middle. You did well on emphisizing that.
I enjoyed Raven's hints at her interest in his independent stance. She gives a tell though that she wants him to be dark at the line "Perhaps you are a moth, like me." She reveals her hope that he may prefer her style life over the traditional, which I personally think he does.
It seems to me that he opens only to Raven, because she understands him better. It's because of their crosses between light and dark that gives them a realistic view of the world is instead of what they wish it was.
So much to be said for a one-shot. You do good work. Keep it up!
12/3/2006 c1 fan
love it, great parrelles
love it, great parrelles
9/2/2006 c1 6The Swashbuckler
K:
Nice read!
Nice use of metaphor as well!
TSB (Also known as Stormking from the Bloc)
6The SwashbucklerK:
Nice read!
Nice use of metaphor as well!
TSB (Also known as Stormking from the Bloc)
6/15/2006 c1 Kitty Hawk
A very moving story deep with wisdom and truths. I sincerely hope you do more one-shots like this since you are very good with them. 10/10 !
A very moving story deep with wisdom and truths. I sincerely hope you do more one-shots like this since you are very good with them. 10/10 !
6/3/2006 c1 LastOneStanding
Are you sure this is your first fic.? That was really great.
Are you sure this is your first fic.? That was really great.
4/30/2006 c1 4hibikiiii
Poor Robin, he tells her then she goes away. In your story isn't that what she wants? To have someone close, but yet she knows she can't have him?
4hibikiiiiPoor Robin, he tells her then she goes away. In your story isn't that what she wants? To have someone close, but yet she knows she can't have him?
4/5/2006 c1 8Panda Slippers
Very cute! A well done metaphor also. I think Robin's a moth...so moths should be together, yes? Yes!
Keep writting!
8Panda SlippersVery cute! A well done metaphor also. I think Robin's a moth...so moths should be together, yes? Yes!
Keep writting!
4/4/2006 c1 9la anjita
That was very sad, and also very well written. I like the way you've used butterflies and moths here. I don't see many fics that use that.
Thank you, that was a very enjoyable read.
9la anjitaThat was very sad, and also very well written. I like the way you've used butterflies and moths here. I don't see many fics that use that.
Thank you, that was a very enjoyable read.
4/4/2006 c1 ravenslair
I enjoyed this one shot very much. I feel you have more to say, if you want to continue this I will certainly read it. Please write more Rob/Rae stories, you seem to be very good at it. Thanks...Gerry
I enjoyed this one shot very much. I feel you have more to say, if you want to continue this I will certainly read it. Please write more Rob/Rae stories, you seem to be very good at it. Thanks...Gerry