for Ghost Trains4/9/2006 c1 
85Animegoil
Aw! No! Don't go! I loved that line about words being sown together by your throat and tongue, and they were in character, thank you! Interesting little ficlet, it actually said a good bit for being so short.
85AnimegoilAw! No! Don't go! I loved that line about words being sown together by your throat and tongue, and they were in character, thank you! Interesting little ficlet, it actually said a good bit for being so short.
4/8/2006 c1 55Frozen-Passion
That made me feel sick to my stomach.
Thats a good thing though...er sorta. It's like this giant pit of Doom... so yeah.
This was sad and sweet and the last line was beautiful. I liked how Cloud could call Leon Squall and he didn't really mind.
So yes. Nice work.
-Frozen-Passion-
55Frozen-PassionThat made me feel sick to my stomach.
Thats a good thing though...er sorta. It's like this giant pit of Doom... so yeah.
This was sad and sweet and the last line was beautiful. I liked how Cloud could call Leon Squall and he didn't really mind.
So yes. Nice work.
-Frozen-Passion-
4/8/2006 c1 8aoyagi
I'm sorry, but I'm not exactly sure...what's going on. There's no reason for Cloud & Leon to forget each other, or be separated, that I can think of. And yes, I have finished the game.
8aoyagiI'm sorry, but I'm not exactly sure...what's going on. There's no reason for Cloud & Leon to forget each other, or be separated, that I can think of. And yes, I have finished the game.
4/8/2006 c1 Bffkmhr
Not much of a plot. Perhaps you should add some hints of a history between the characters to it. Oh, and sexual tension. I love sexual tension! And Leon and Cloud are hot!
Not much of a plot. Perhaps you should add some hints of a history between the characters to it. Oh, and sexual tension. I love sexual tension! And Leon and Cloud are hot!