
10/21/2008 c5
1DarkDemonWithinMe13
hey love the story please keep writing. it really sucks that you cant see your siblings and that your dad is a drunk i can kinda relate not with the whole drunk part but my dad acts like he doesnt give a shit about us. he yells at us all the time when we try to help i personally think one day he'll start to beat us my mom isnt gay but my best friend that i had told me a couple months ago that she was gay and then she tried to get in my pants while i was sleeping.cringes.(im a girl if you havent guessed =p) i dont kno anyone whos got so many problems as you (no affence) but i do have a little sister who has down syndrom she is basically a vegitable that is feed through a tube but this is probably borig you. sorry. anyway my point is your not alone out their. also some advise if you allow anonymous reader to comment you'll get a lot more review from those who dont have an account. (i didnt even kno i had mine on when i first joined which wasnt very long ago so just some friendly advise for you)
anyway... BYE BYE I LOVE YOU MUAHAHHAHAHAAHHA IM HYPER I JUST ATE MORE THEN HALF OF A GIANT CHOCOLATE BAR! MUAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAAHHAHA BYE

hey love the story please keep writing. it really sucks that you cant see your siblings and that your dad is a drunk i can kinda relate not with the whole drunk part but my dad acts like he doesnt give a shit about us. he yells at us all the time when we try to help i personally think one day he'll start to beat us my mom isnt gay but my best friend that i had told me a couple months ago that she was gay and then she tried to get in my pants while i was sleeping.cringes.(im a girl if you havent guessed =p) i dont kno anyone whos got so many problems as you (no affence) but i do have a little sister who has down syndrom she is basically a vegitable that is feed through a tube but this is probably borig you. sorry. anyway my point is your not alone out their. also some advise if you allow anonymous reader to comment you'll get a lot more review from those who dont have an account. (i didnt even kno i had mine on when i first joined which wasnt very long ago so just some friendly advise for you)
anyway... BYE BYE I LOVE YOU MUAHAHHAHAHAAHHA IM HYPER I JUST ATE MORE THEN HALF OF A GIANT CHOCOLATE BAR! MUAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAAHHAHA BYE
10/20/2008 c3
1FoxFire7
WOW thats alot in ur life sry bout that. I really like your story and theres only one chapter. Try to update SOON THANKS

WOW thats alot in ur life sry bout that. I really like your story and theres only one chapter. Try to update SOON THANKS
12/6/2007 c4 Forsaken Ai
Hi names Ai and I just wanted to say i love the story, and FINALLY SOMEONE WHO KNOWS WHO BELONGS TOGETHER lol. So ya keep up the writing cuz i cant wait to read the next chapter. Ja ne.
Hi names Ai and I just wanted to say i love the story, and FINALLY SOMEONE WHO KNOWS WHO BELONGS TOGETHER lol. So ya keep up the writing cuz i cant wait to read the next chapter. Ja ne.
9/22/2007 c4
2Kaylee-chan
i love it i will email you if i ahve any ideas. when are you going to update? i have never wrote a lemon but i love them i think their HOTT! (i know im a henti too(i hope i spelled that write o_o)lol!) ilove your idea of kagome as an inu-hanyou i love storys like that. well ja ne! hope you update soon!

i love it i will email you if i ahve any ideas. when are you going to update? i have never wrote a lemon but i love them i think their HOTT! (i know im a henti too(i hope i spelled that write o_o)lol!) ilove your idea of kagome as an inu-hanyou i love storys like that. well ja ne! hope you update soon!
5/25/2007 c4
1LEMonSArTiFiCiAlVoDkAandChAiRs
hi! me again, i really love your story, so would you please update more? and if you need help with a lemon, i read some crazy shit by Gbaby808. she's really good at writing lemons, or Ameherst, she's one of my favorite writers on fanfiction,but she writes CodeLyoko, well, those two are the only people i can think of right now, maybe they would help if you asked.but i am looking forward to you updating.

hi! me again, i really love your story, so would you please update more? and if you need help with a lemon, i read some crazy shit by Gbaby808. she's really good at writing lemons, or Ameherst, she's one of my favorite writers on fanfiction,but she writes CodeLyoko, well, those two are the only people i can think of right now, maybe they would help if you asked.but i am looking forward to you updating.
5/25/2007 c3 LEMonSArTiFiCiAlVoDkAandChAiRs
oh my kami! im so sorry! i thought my life sucked! but, on the bright side, at least you have one place to get away to,
oh my kami! im so sorry! i thought my life sucked! but, on the bright side, at least you have one place to get away to,
5/25/2007 c2 LEMonSArTiFiCiAlVoDkAandChAiRs
oh KAMI! That dream of kagome's would be like hell on earth! i had the same dream once, but then i got out a flame thrower and torched everything, so it was black...me and my crazy mind, if only the only color you could wear were black, that would be so fuckin' awesome!XD i love your story, im trying not to die from laughing when im reading it!
oh KAMI! That dream of kagome's would be like hell on earth! i had the same dream once, but then i got out a flame thrower and torched everything, so it was black...me and my crazy mind, if only the only color you could wear were black, that would be so fuckin' awesome!XD i love your story, im trying not to die from laughing when im reading it!
5/25/2007 c1 LEMonSArTiFiCiAlVoDkAandChAiRs
ha ha roflmfao! kinky-ho! i like your style! you, me, and my friend would get along. me and my friends are such a bitch to kikyo, or, as you say, kinky-ho. i like that, where did you come up with that? to me kikyo should die a terrible, slow agonizing death, with the killer none other than...INUYASHA! i know, im evil... no need for praiseXD
ha ha roflmfao! kinky-ho! i like your style! you, me, and my friend would get along. me and my friends are such a bitch to kikyo, or, as you say, kinky-ho. i like that, where did you come up with that? to me kikyo should die a terrible, slow agonizing death, with the killer none other than...INUYASHA! i know, im evil... no need for praiseXD
5/15/2007 c4 animefreek4ever
i actually like this story...all you need is spacing between the lines because i cant read when it so close together like that...and i cant write for shit so i cant rele help you with the whole lemon thing...but hey im a fellow hentai but not a hentai writer!
i actually like this story...all you need is spacing between the lines because i cant read when it so close together like that...and i cant write for shit so i cant rele help you with the whole lemon thing...but hey im a fellow hentai but not a hentai writer!