10/28/2014 c2 40Concolor44
You'd said this was supposed to be five short pieces, yet there are but two. And it has been eight years ...
I'm sorry you decided to abandon this.
You'd said this was supposed to be five short pieces, yet there are but two. And it has been eight years ...
I'm sorry you decided to abandon this.
10/28/2014 c1 Concolor44
My word.
That was a LOT darker than I'd expected. Not sure yet how to react.
My word.
That was a LOT darker than I'd expected. Not sure yet how to react.
3/31/2008 c1 5Muse-ical
Sorry, it seems I didn't sign the first review, but two for this doesn't hurt, you deserve it.
Sorry, it seems I didn't sign the first review, but two for this doesn't hurt, you deserve it.
3/31/2008 c2 Guest
I added you to my favorites and this story is the reason. There is no doubt you have talent, and I like the style you take with the Fables fanfic. Plus Bigby and Snow are an awesome pairing that just shouldn't be messed with.
And this is just me, because my mind is nearly always in the gutter, but "well-lubricated" was an amusing phrase. I know what you were getting at... just, tch. Lube...
A review given in hope for a review received, whether or not you are familiar with the fandom.
I await the next chapter with great interest.
I added you to my favorites and this story is the reason. There is no doubt you have talent, and I like the style you take with the Fables fanfic. Plus Bigby and Snow are an awesome pairing that just shouldn't be messed with.
And this is just me, because my mind is nearly always in the gutter, but "well-lubricated" was an amusing phrase. I know what you were getting at... just, tch. Lube...
A review given in hope for a review received, whether or not you are familiar with the fandom.
I await the next chapter with great interest.
4/15/2006 c2 15TrudiRose
Oh! Now I see! See, I should have read on before reviewing chapter 1. :) Should have known he wouldn't kill her. VERY compelling twist! There definitely is a fascination to that "beastly" form. This reminds me of a book called "Bitten" by Kelley Armstrong, about a female werewolf, which among other things described the feeling of being a wolf: the sheer joy of power and speed and fur, the pleasure of hunting and killing. I want to read more about these two! Good job!
Oh! Now I see! See, I should have read on before reviewing chapter 1. :) Should have known he wouldn't kill her. VERY compelling twist! There definitely is a fascination to that "beastly" form. This reminds me of a book called "Bitten" by Kelley Armstrong, about a female werewolf, which among other things described the feeling of being a wolf: the sheer joy of power and speed and fur, the pleasure of hunting and killing. I want to read more about these two! Good job!
4/15/2006 c1 TrudiRose
Wow, that was unexpected...I thought it was just going to be one of those "chance encounter" foreshadowing-of-later-relationship type stories (although the "never happened" of the title should have tipped me off!) Very chilling and powerful ending. I like your descriptions in the piece: I could really feel that cold, brisk day and hear the crunching of snow underfoot. Good job!
Wow, that was unexpected...I thought it was just going to be one of those "chance encounter" foreshadowing-of-later-relationship type stories (although the "never happened" of the title should have tipped me off!) Very chilling and powerful ending. I like your descriptions in the piece: I could really feel that cold, brisk day and hear the crunching of snow underfoot. Good job!