for Family Destiny1/28/2005 c2 
33Saber Girls
Hey, this is an interesting idea, but you need to backtrack. Is there some ML romance here, or was it all an accident or happened while she was undercover, or what? More would be interesting, tho I doubt an update is probable judging that the last was three and a half years ago.
MTFBWY,
~SG Leia
33Saber GirlsHey, this is an interesting idea, but you need to backtrack. Is there some ML romance here, or was it all an accident or happened while she was undercover, or what? More would be interesting, tho I doubt an update is probable judging that the last was three and a half years ago.
MTFBWY,
~SG Leia
1/21/2003 c1 Urazz
It has potential but its too short, has no detail and has no background information as to how Mara became pregnant with Luke's child.
It has potential but its too short, has no detail and has no background information as to how Mara became pregnant with Luke's child.
12/20/2002 c2 36Jacen200015
So when are you going to post the next chapter? I hope you continue soon.
36Jacen200015So when are you going to post the next chapter? I hope you continue soon.
3/26/2002 c2 Jayde Star
I like this, are you ever going to finish it?
I like this, are you ever going to finish it?
1/25/2002 c2 jdaw4210
That was REALLY REALLY good! Write more please!
J.
That was REALLY REALLY good! Write more please!
J.
8/30/2001 c2 1MaraSkywhiner
hey there. yes, I made a spoof of my own life if anyone cares. My parents' names really are Lindy and Steve, and my name really is Whitney. So, anyone that knows me knows that this is a big joke where the names are concerned, (although it would be nice if my 'rents were from Coruscant, but it ain't in the cards.) so no more making fun of names. These are people I know, not figments of my imagination. k, c-ya, and a big thanks to Andrea, my wonderful beta reader (I forgot to put a thank you in chap 1, 'cause I typed out the front at around 2am.) ne way, thanks for reading and reviewing, it makes a big difference. may the force be with ya'll.
1MaraSkywhinerhey there. yes, I made a spoof of my own life if anyone cares. My parents' names really are Lindy and Steve, and my name really is Whitney. So, anyone that knows me knows that this is a big joke where the names are concerned, (although it would be nice if my 'rents were from Coruscant, but it ain't in the cards.) so no more making fun of names. These are people I know, not figments of my imagination. k, c-ya, and a big thanks to Andrea, my wonderful beta reader (I forgot to put a thank you in chap 1, 'cause I typed out the front at around 2am.) ne way, thanks for reading and reviewing, it makes a big difference. may the force be with ya'll.
8/30/2001 c2 GruMpy2348
This is great. Hope you post again soon!
This is great. Hope you post again soon!
8/29/2001 c2 Q
Lindy? And that unimprovable scifi name, Steve? This isn't a bad story, you just need to use a little more imagination.
Lindy? And that unimprovable scifi name, Steve? This isn't a bad story, you just need to use a little more imagination.
8/28/2001 c2 49PrincessSkywalkerOrgana
finish it please. i dunno if i like it yet. *sorry* but i still want to read the next chapter.
49PrincessSkywalkerOrganafinish it please. i dunno if i like it yet. *sorry* but i still want to read the next chapter.
8/28/2001 c2 HotMama69
wow this was really good! What a coinsidence with lindy and steve being your "parents". This isn't just a story folks, this is the real thing! Good JOb, keep em' comin'!
wow this was really good! What a coinsidence with lindy and steve being your "parents". This isn't just a story folks, this is the real thing! Good JOb, keep em' comin'!
7/24/2001 c1 Yoda's Girl
Ok folks this was a great one wasn't it. Fortunetly, I am one of mara skywhiner's close friends, so I have already got to read chapter 1! And its a doozy! Look for it comn' soon. Also you can read one of my fics, look for the author: Yoda's Girl.
Ok folks this was a great one wasn't it. Fortunetly, I am one of mara skywhiner's close friends, so I have already got to read chapter 1! And its a doozy! Look for it comn' soon. Also you can read one of my fics, look for the author: Yoda's Girl.
6/28/2001 c1 Jacen200015
wow
wow
6/15/2001 c1 lady girl
ar u gonna finish?
ar u gonna finish?
5/29/2001 c1 AphroditeDeOlympus
Ok, I will be kind. When Chapter One coming?
Ok, I will be kind. When Chapter One coming?