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24Warui-Usagi
Woah...that certainly was interesting. You're one of the first to explore this concept and I find your point of view quite a compelling one as well. It was kinda sad too, but that's Elfen Lied for you, I suppose. Great fic anyway, keep up the hard work!
24Warui-UsagiWoah...that certainly was interesting. You're one of the first to explore this concept and I find your point of view quite a compelling one as well. It was kinda sad too, but that's Elfen Lied for you, I suppose. Great fic anyway, keep up the hard work!
4/24/2006 c1 2LaniZion
Well, that was quite an interesting concept. I think you're the first person to touch on what would happen after Lucy chose to live on into the future. And I can see that after a tragic war, a shaky peace was formed, though I kinda felt bad for Lucy, knowing that she could've ended all this pain long ago.
Tch, that's really sad, but it's a good fic as well. ^^
2LaniZionWell, that was quite an interesting concept. I think you're the first person to touch on what would happen after Lucy chose to live on into the future. And I can see that after a tragic war, a shaky peace was formed, though I kinda felt bad for Lucy, knowing that she could've ended all this pain long ago.
Tch, that's really sad, but it's a good fic as well. ^^
4/24/2006 c1 Defiled one
this is great, the plot is great, there is nothing to say to it, of course you will improve your writing, it takes time but you get there,i remenbered also this idea but it didnt seem to work, its perfect the political tension yes you portrayed the future. that i am right.
this is great, the plot is great, there is nothing to say to it, of course you will improve your writing, it takes time but you get there,i remenbered also this idea but it didnt seem to work, its perfect the political tension yes you portrayed the future. that i am right.