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8/19/2006 c1 Rat Warlock
Ever thought of continuing this one? You still have some things you could work with. Its a good story and I wish they would have let you keep it as a song fic. I like those a lot
5/16/2006 c1 1FunniesKitten
This is a good story but seen like it could be so much more if you keep on writing. Are you going to add more or just do this one piece.
5/6/2006 c1 31AstroLatte
I Love:

Your writing style.

Your way of telling the story.

Your idea.

Your entire fic!
5/3/2006 c1 6evil chick
Hey that was pretty cool :) So there is going to be a second chapter right? If not then it feels a little incomplete...well I'll stick around if there is a second chapter. oh btw it would be pretty awesome if you showed a little bit of what Vash was thinking too unless its gonna be first person. Well that's just a preference of mine but you don't really don't need to change anything if you like :D
4/26/2006 c1 35youkai chick supreme
::blinks:: is that the end? girl, or guy... you need a sequel! not bad, but this seemed a little disjointed, like you wrote it in installments. good beginning. the ending could use a little work though. overall, i'd give it an 8. nice job.

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