for The Pink Room of Doom5/17/2009 c3 moonchild
i love it! especially the evil bunnies unfortuanateley since all of my friends are insane along with myself we love the idea of pink fluffy evil bunnies lol dang oh well bunnies rule! lol
i love it! especially the evil bunnies unfortuanateley since all of my friends are insane along with myself we love the idea of pink fluffy evil bunnies lol dang oh well bunnies rule! lol
6/3/2006 c2 
18AdamiRose
Poor Snape...bunny's putting funky hearts in his mouth. At least he gets to kiss Hermione...it could be worse, far worse...he could have had to kiss Dumbledore *shudder* (Too much time in the Arizona heat for me!)
And as for Arizona, I'm with you! I Can't stand it here! any insults you can come up with, I probably will too at some point if I haven't already! (been here for 10 years, I'm good at insulting this place)
18AdamiRosePoor Snape...bunny's putting funky hearts in his mouth. At least he gets to kiss Hermione...it could be worse, far worse...he could have had to kiss Dumbledore *shudder* (Too much time in the Arizona heat for me!)
And as for Arizona, I'm with you! I Can't stand it here! any insults you can come up with, I probably will too at some point if I haven't already! (been here for 10 years, I'm good at insulting this place)
5/23/2006 c3 3green-eyed-angel
HELL YEAH! you wrote another chapter.
*TEAR TEAR* cause I'm laughing so hard.
For some reason picturing everyone stuck in the same room all as you said PLAYING TONSEL HOCKEY with fucking evil lil bunnies roaming is pretty damn halarious. So as for you thinking it's not funny your so fucking wrong.
I'm one of those people that still after seeing Dumb and Dumber 10,0 times I still laugh my ass off every time.
Thank you for updating this but I'm still sad it's over *hint hint*LOL!
Your Faithful Reader
green-eyed-angel
3green-eyed-angelHELL YEAH! you wrote another chapter.
*TEAR TEAR* cause I'm laughing so hard.
For some reason picturing everyone stuck in the same room all as you said PLAYING TONSEL HOCKEY with fucking evil lil bunnies roaming is pretty damn halarious. So as for you thinking it's not funny your so fucking wrong.
I'm one of those people that still after seeing Dumb and Dumber 10,0 times I still laugh my ass off every time.
Thank you for updating this but I'm still sad it's over *hint hint*LOL!
Your Faithful Reader
green-eyed-angel
5/7/2006 c2 1Aeris921
Well you asked for flames...
You need a beta, or at least you need to read what you write before posting it, because there are many grammar and spelling errors as well as sentences that just plain don't make sense. Everybody's out of character (not that that's saying much because you most likely intended it, but it's just one more thing to criticize). The rating is wrong too, it can't be K+ because of language. The characters are poorly developed, the plot, if it can even be called that, is hardly explained, and on a whole I didn't find it even remotely funny.
However, if you take more time writing it, it really could develop into a good story. I mean, it IS a good idea.
P.S. Don't get mad at me for what I wrote. You asked for it, and besides, the above is more like harsh constructive criticism than actual flames.
1Aeris921Well you asked for flames...
You need a beta, or at least you need to read what you write before posting it, because there are many grammar and spelling errors as well as sentences that just plain don't make sense. Everybody's out of character (not that that's saying much because you most likely intended it, but it's just one more thing to criticize). The rating is wrong too, it can't be K+ because of language. The characters are poorly developed, the plot, if it can even be called that, is hardly explained, and on a whole I didn't find it even remotely funny.
However, if you take more time writing it, it really could develop into a good story. I mean, it IS a good idea.
P.S. Don't get mad at me for what I wrote. You asked for it, and besides, the above is more like harsh constructive criticism than actual flames.
5/6/2006 c2 19American Punk
LOL. funny, Hey I happen to like Arizona! But it does get hotter than hades there.
-A.P.
19American PunkLOL. funny, Hey I happen to like Arizona! But it does get hotter than hades there.
-A.P.
5/6/2006 c2 14starlightdreamer052000
ah pink fluffy bunies thats wrong o so many levels. Made me laugh though so all is well. grins sheepishly... please continue and if you think arazion bad try cornwall it a hell hole in the middle of nowhere
14starlightdreamer052000ah pink fluffy bunies thats wrong o so many levels. Made me laugh though so all is well. grins sheepishly... please continue and if you think arazion bad try cornwall it a hell hole in the middle of nowhere
5/3/2006 c1 19American Punk
LOL! I think it's HILARIOUS! Plz update soon. I wanna see how the stroy unfolds.
-A.P.
19American PunkLOL! I think it's HILARIOUS! Plz update soon. I wanna see how the stroy unfolds.
-A.P.
5/2/2006 c1 3green-eyed-angel
I'm gonna quote Sev kinda well I'm gonna ue one of his words this fic is so FUCKING funny so far love it more PLEASE!
green_eyed_angel
3green-eyed-angelI'm gonna quote Sev kinda well I'm gonna ue one of his words this fic is so FUCKING funny so far love it more PLEASE!
green_eyed_angel