for Consequences of Nothing7/28/2014 c1 Aggarwal9421
Please make this a whole book it would be a great one!
Please make this a whole book it would be a great one!
3/1/2008 c1 
65titpuce86
I had a lot of fun reading this. Thanks a lot for this particularly good moment!
65titpuce86I had a lot of fun reading this. Thanks a lot for this particularly good moment!
5/24/2006 c1 Guest
Very good, I really enjoyed it! Remus saying the thing about being a man and insulting Sirius to his face was very funny. The imagined letter to Lily's parents was very good, as was the imagined schedule. I also liked when she dropped the quill to talk to James and he was trying to protest he hadn't done anything and the part where Remus gets all upset over James taking his advice when he hadn't even meant it to be advice and saying the thing about buttered toast. Basically, it was very amusing :)
It ended in a good place, though it came a little faster then I expected. I didn't think she'd catch him, I thought that Lily would eventually go crawling back to him or something and they'd get together. But I'm glad it didn't happen that way because, one, it would have been a little cliched and not very good unless you did it really well, and, two, it was just good this way. I don't like those LJ fics where James suddenly stops being a nuisance and starts ignoring Lily for whatever reason and then she decides that she's in love with him. It's so unrealistic, who would love a guy who was a total nuisance? She has to somehow realize he's not as bad as she thought for it to work. It was good how you did it, having her realize that he was an important part of her life but not suddenly she's in love with him.
Anyway, I really liked it. Bravo!
Very good, I really enjoyed it! Remus saying the thing about being a man and insulting Sirius to his face was very funny. The imagined letter to Lily's parents was very good, as was the imagined schedule. I also liked when she dropped the quill to talk to James and he was trying to protest he hadn't done anything and the part where Remus gets all upset over James taking his advice when he hadn't even meant it to be advice and saying the thing about buttered toast. Basically, it was very amusing :)
It ended in a good place, though it came a little faster then I expected. I didn't think she'd catch him, I thought that Lily would eventually go crawling back to him or something and they'd get together. But I'm glad it didn't happen that way because, one, it would have been a little cliched and not very good unless you did it really well, and, two, it was just good this way. I don't like those LJ fics where James suddenly stops being a nuisance and starts ignoring Lily for whatever reason and then she decides that she's in love with him. It's so unrealistic, who would love a guy who was a total nuisance? She has to somehow realize he's not as bad as she thought for it to work. It was good how you did it, having her realize that he was an important part of her life but not suddenly she's in love with him.
Anyway, I really liked it. Bravo!
5/6/2006 c1 mae513
I do hope that this isn't a one-shot. Its too good of a story to be. Loved this chapter by the way. I like the dynamics of the Lily and James relationship. Keep up the great work and please update soon! :)
I do hope that this isn't a one-shot. Its too good of a story to be. Loved this chapter by the way. I like the dynamics of the Lily and James relationship. Keep up the great work and please update soon! :)
5/6/2006 c1 4iluvgerardbutler
cute! very, very cute! very well written, and i like the switching of POVs. great story!
4iluvgerardbutlercute! very, very cute! very well written, and i like the switching of POVs. great story!
5/6/2006 c1 Kagura-I am the Wind
Thats just too funny! It's shame though potter didn't win, oh well, he'll get lily edventually. :) Great story!
Thats just too funny! It's shame though potter didn't win, oh well, he'll get lily edventually. :) Great story!
5/5/2006 c1 Kevin
Nice start!..update soon!
Nice start!..update soon!
5/4/2006 c1 teh.stupid.authress.person
Awesome! =O I love it. Please update! Right away!
-teh.stupid
Awesome! =O I love it. Please update! Right away!
-teh.stupid