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11/13/2017 c1 6my 2 guys
that was good keep the chapters coming
11/13/2010 c1 Anne1313
wow

that seal thing is cool
11/1/2008 c1 tavisa
awesome!
4/9/2008 c1 IReadOnly
Who will Naruto be paired?

I hope it's Hinata...

GO NARUHINA!

Ehem...

Anyways...

You've started great!

The Freezing Noodle thing got me laughing hard!

hehe
3/10/2008 c1 Hey
Its pretty good.. but one thing that is seriously getting on my nervers is how people say Tsunade is so STRONG... that is a god damn technique! jesus christ people, she not actually that strong. all it is is condensed chakra being blasted out at the exact right moment. this has all been explained before, so why do people still say that SHE is that strong! seriously, every story i read i see this. ITS A DAMN TECHNIQUE!
2/17/2008 c1 16Sharingan-hater86
really like the start, so who is he going to hook up with eventually ja nee
11/21/2007 c1 4INUJ.E.S.06
if naruto's technique freezes every muscle in the body wouldnt it also stop the recipient's heart?
10/15/2007 c1 5KuroKage1717
wow - a really long chapter, and a very good one too! i love the idea of naruto's plan to take down itachi in order to get to sasuke/orochimaru. are you planning on continuing this story? because, you really should - it's great, so far.
4/4/2007 c1 GaaraSarcasm
wow that was one big a$$ chapter! lol like the story line can't wait 4 the next chap! ^^ cya
3/6/2007 c1 1Mendokusai88
Really good story, can't wait for the fight scene with Itachi. Update soon please.
3/2/2007 c1 1Ander
This is such a good story. I'm really disappointed to see that it's probably abandoned. It would make my day to see it you work on it some more.
2/19/2007 c1 ALKHDLKH
Now I want a Jiraiya plushy to hug. I wuvs him and Naruto. I love how protective you made Jiraiya of Naruto I think its cute. I agree with you that Sakura is a complete bitch and deserves to die a horrible death so if you have her apprenticeship taken away I'll probably start cheering loudly for you while reading about it. Anyway I hope you update soon I can't wait to read more and you also did an awesome job of keeping everyone in character!
10/25/2006 c1 timtomtim
one of the best stories ive read

hurry up and update
10/24/2006 c1 5wrong light
good lord in heaven. may this story live long and update quickly. amen.
10/14/2006 c1 Merlin
Ok, this is really good. Naruto's new ability, the final contact, is absolutely awesome and the sort of unexpected thing that suits his style. Quite frankly, this is the beginning of a great story. Also, the way that Jiraiya and Naruto act is very interesting and in character (considering the situation.)

Great story, and keep it up! Looking forward to your next chapter.
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