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9/30/2020 c14 davidiscoolya113
The six days and 7 day thing it's not talking by our time but using metaphors to describe God's time in the Bible it also describes one of God's days being nearly uncountable the correct number probably like half past like several 10,000 million million million million or something so science describes in our words the days it took God to create all creation God exists in all places so God created all the versions of creation as well at the same time.
6/3/2020 c1 Guest
Buffy-bashing Xander-wank
8/22/2016 c15 36Ihatechoosinganame
Really good story, wish it didn't stop here
5/3/2016 c15 Guest
YOU fucker
2/26/2014 c15 7bigfan22
I thought this was an excellent story. You really took your time building up Xander's new life, and I liked the way you brought him back to Sunnydale. The new Big Bad you created was also a nice touch.

Even though this story hasn't been updated in awhile, and I doubt you will continue it, I still gotta say it was a pleasure to read. Great job!
10/8/2010 c11 ChaosRune
She blames herself for pushing away the one person who held and protected her heart.

A punch to the solar plexus couldn't have hurt as much as those words from Willow had. Only Willow's arms stopped Alex from falling down, his legs feeling rubbery all of a sudden. The tears he'd managed to keep at bay burst forth, trailing hot tracks down his face.

"No!", he whispered.

So why was that such a shock? That's why he left! My God it's like some wussy and emo Xander took the place of the one at the beginning! He may moan and bitch all you want, but at the end of the day he just forgive them! What the heck is wrong with him? And don't even let me star with you Asian Mary Sue Lee guy, that was one of the worst plot devices I have ever seen to make Xander forgive everybody
3/20/2008 c15 vrewc
What a terrible place to leave this story. I'm assuming it's been abandoned for one reason or another, since it's been 4 years now since the last update.

Either way, this is definitely a very good story and it would have been nice to see how it ended. If anybody knows what's happened to the author and if there's a more complete version anywhere else, or if someone else has decided to finish this please send me a link.

Thanks,

nuvachaos
1/30/2005 c15 16RTds9
I love this story!I found it somewhere else first but was glad to find it here to.I would love to see more added to it.Now for the record I hate B/X.I'm a huge C/X fan but wouldnt mind seeing F/X in this story.But please no B/X.But I am loving seeing Buffy jealous of Xander this time around.
7/13/2004 c15 3delta-negative
just picked up this story and i love it, are you planning on continuing it or has it been abandoned?
1/20/2004 c15 1QManRedgunner
Nothing bad to say about this fiction. Except it's not finished yet, because I want to know what happens next.
I love fictions that empower Xander. He's my favorite character, and you've done a good job with him.
1/9/2004 c15 1WBH21C
So very cool to see more of this outstanding fic. Well done!
1/9/2004 c15 6Daevanus
Loved the story, and the path your takin' with the characters. Keep up the good work!
1/8/2004 c15 9Darklight
O yes another chapter, get new chapters out fast.
Giles has made a major mistake, getting between Xander and his talk with Buffy. somehow someway Buffy isn'g getting to call Xander and he'll wait in front of her door, creating a bigger rift between them.
Can't wait to see how Xander is going to react to the latest rejection, going to push Buffy over the edge and take her out of the fight before it even start.
The games have starten like Lucy said can't wait to see what next is to happen.
8/30/2003 c1 Beleg
Story is poorly paced, with a ridiculous plot and OOC actions. Needs a total trashing and rewrite to be even decent.
8/30/2003 c1 Beleg
Story is poorly paced, with a ridiculous plot and OOC actions. Needs a total trashing and rewrite to be even decent.
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