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8/5/2007 c1 15Gala000085
Freakin' scary! Very well written.
6/28/2007 c1 1demon-girl98
hey this would make a really interesting story if you chose to do that.
10/30/2006 c1 Kay
That was miserable.

Effective but miserable.

A few little errors (drupe not droop) but nothing major.

It was a very good piece of writing.
7/1/2006 c1 Lairall
Just wanted to let you know that I've been reading other roswell fic and loving it.

Poor Max...and Pam?

Please keep going!
6/30/2006 c1 45broodyleytons
AH-MAZ-ING.

hahaa. even tho i already read this like...whhen you put it up.

but i felt like leavin one

love ya
6/12/2006 c1 Brasha
He was attracted to those like flies.** (It didn't really make sense... hadta read it a lot)

I liked the ending lots! Yea... seems like it'll also be good... I mean... it already is pretty good... but I know it could be better...

Welp... guess that's it on this one... not too much to say.
5/25/2006 c1 ParkerEvanss
That was horrible. You did a wonderful job at creating a scene of utter desolation. There is no hope and barely anything left of him. You named your fic aptly. Again, you did a very good job, but I really hope that your other fics (if you have written other) are more happy than that.
5/10/2006 c1 2SupernaturalGal6
this was really good. you should continue it, but i can see if you don't...it's really good.

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