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5/16/2006 c2 Shikon Siren
YAY! I love this story! ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!
5/16/2006 c2 Lucinda2323
Wow! Nice scene at the end there! I like the way he leaned over but didn't kiss her; very nice way to up the tension between them. And I like how you don't have Kagome and Inuyasha constantly bickering or anything like that-this is much more subtle & very good. I'm very anxious to find out what happens next!
5/16/2006 c2 waterandsky04
that was interesting but it was also good update soon
5/16/2006 c2 Emsie12
Oh! This looks like it's going to be interesting! ;) Anyways can't wait until you update! ^_^
5/16/2006 c2 twinkle-twilight
hie! interesting and great story pls continue to update asap can't wait! XD
5/15/2006 c1 Lucinda2323
This looks promising! I'm very interested to find out what happens-how the pressures of society bear down on the characters and how they react. You're off to a great start, in my opinion. Can't wait to see what happens next, so please update.
5/14/2006 c1 bloodystainedrejectedfreak
good story...
5/14/2006 c1 71WitchyGirl99
Wow, I love this! It's great how you portrayed the image pressure from society can give and it's made a great storyline! I can't wait for more!

WitchyGirl99
5/14/2006 c1 8haunting hanyou
nice story
5/14/2006 c1 potechi
sounds great so far :D

Please update soon :)
5/13/2006 c1 3lunamoon0320
great story so far keep it up=)
5/13/2006 c1 belovedlight
ok so i like it so far but i want to ask you a question: who is Andrew? it goes from Miroku to being Andrew and i wanted to bring that to your attention... =) oh and then theres a part that says:

Kagome was a great person, yet she constantly keeled to the pressures of society and her parents.

Is that suposed to say kneeled? just wondering on that one

Kagome unconsciously began to twirl a piece of her long blond hair as she retold her previous lie.

Is Kagome a blonde in this?

just trying to help! =) i like i hope you keep going on with it! =)
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