for Undone6/25/2019 c1 
9tmart.x13
A friend recommended me to read this story and I am so glad that I did. This was a very different and interesting take on the events of Advent Children. I really enjoyed the brotherly relationship that you were able to make with Cloud and the remnants, developing a sort of bond for them as well. This really made me feel for Kadaj truly, as none of it was really his choice and had been forced to be Sephiroth's vessel basically. And you ended up making it apparent that Cloud realized that as well, and the way that he reacted to that fact and to the brothers as well was very much in character for him. The details and descriptions that was used through this story as nice to see as well. This is the best Kadaj fic that I have read and I like the sympathy that was shown to the remnants too. Great job on this!
9tmart.x13A friend recommended me to read this story and I am so glad that I did. This was a very different and interesting take on the events of Advent Children. I really enjoyed the brotherly relationship that you were able to make with Cloud and the remnants, developing a sort of bond for them as well. This really made me feel for Kadaj truly, as none of it was really his choice and had been forced to be Sephiroth's vessel basically. And you ended up making it apparent that Cloud realized that as well, and the way that he reacted to that fact and to the brothers as well was very much in character for him. The details and descriptions that was used through this story as nice to see as well. This is the best Kadaj fic that I have read and I like the sympathy that was shown to the remnants too. Great job on this!
5/20/2019 c1 87Riku Kingdom Hearts
This was very interesting! This makes me think of the remnants in a different light. But I enjoyed the feelings in this and the ending.
87Riku Kingdom HeartsThis was very interesting! This makes me think of the remnants in a different light. But I enjoyed the feelings in this and the ending.
7/9/2014 c1 68Shade the Hero
This was so sweet and...wait,...what's this wet stuff coming from my eyes? Dang it. my eyes are leaking. This must be really good for them to do that. It normally doesn't happen when I read. I loved this so much. And it could be the start of a great new story. Have you considered continuing this? I would definitely read it if you did. :)
68Shade the HeroThis was so sweet and...wait,...what's this wet stuff coming from my eyes? Dang it. my eyes are leaking. This must be really good for them to do that. It normally doesn't happen when I read. I loved this so much. And it could be the start of a great new story. Have you considered continuing this? I would definitely read it if you did. :)
12/6/2007 c1 StarCaptain
This is a beautiful story and I wish you'd write a sequel. It feels incomlete like this...or maybe that's my own curiosity. Don't leave me hanging like this! Does Kadaj survive? Do they learn to get along? The three were an excellent fighting team. To have them on Clouds' side would be great.
This is a beautiful story and I wish you'd write a sequel. It feels incomlete like this...or maybe that's my own curiosity. Don't leave me hanging like this! Does Kadaj survive? Do they learn to get along? The three were an excellent fighting team. To have them on Clouds' side would be great.
11/27/2007 c1 5Zephyrus Genesis
I love it, are you going to continue? I also believe that the trio deserved a second chance. Please update soon.
5Zephyrus GenesisI love it, are you going to continue? I also believe that the trio deserved a second chance. Please update soon.
11/25/2007 c1 phantomshadowdragon
I love it! I hated the fact that they had to die. :( It made me cry. They had deserved a chance at life just as much as Cloud had. Kadaj had been right though, Cloud had done exactly what they had done. So way did Cloud get the special treatment? ...Ok, I'm done ranting. XD
I love it! I hated the fact that they had to die. :( It made me cry. They had deserved a chance at life just as much as Cloud had. Kadaj had been right though, Cloud had done exactly what they had done. So way did Cloud get the special treatment? ...Ok, I'm done ranting. XD
9/3/2007 c1 43Von
This is PERFECT!
I had the exact same belief. None of the three were evil.. just driven - partly by the Jenova cells within them, straining to rejoin and partly by their own creation and upbringing - to join together, to be a family. Theire emotions were genuine.. they fought not to kill the planet, but to reunite with Mother and Brother... and the fact that they treated CLOUD as Big Brother was all the sweeter... How easy it could have been to simply write him off. Instead they gave him the title of elder and used it with respect..
And at the end when Kadaj was there in his arms.. I SO wanted Cloud to keep him. When he faded away I was all NO.
So I love this to BITS and I would be exultant to recieve an alert for some kind of follow-up. Hell, I'd be mega-excited to brainstorm something with you, or even just act as idea-bouncer/general begger upon demand! :D
It would be nice.. if - even if Kadaj remained special to Loz and Yazoo - they learnt to trust Cloud for himself, and not just on Kadaj's instructions. And I think a family - one that are capable yet also somewhat dependant - if only emotionally - would be good for Cloud.
After all, you CAN have a lone Wolf.. but wolves tend to prefer packs.. :D
(I already found it sweet that Cloud's 'pack' including Tifa and Denzel (and, you never know, maybe his other friends too) had little Wolf rings on them.) )
My sincere thanks for writing this. It put into words exactly what Ive been searching for.
43VonThis is PERFECT!
I had the exact same belief. None of the three were evil.. just driven - partly by the Jenova cells within them, straining to rejoin and partly by their own creation and upbringing - to join together, to be a family. Theire emotions were genuine.. they fought not to kill the planet, but to reunite with Mother and Brother... and the fact that they treated CLOUD as Big Brother was all the sweeter... How easy it could have been to simply write him off. Instead they gave him the title of elder and used it with respect..
And at the end when Kadaj was there in his arms.. I SO wanted Cloud to keep him. When he faded away I was all NO.
So I love this to BITS and I would be exultant to recieve an alert for some kind of follow-up. Hell, I'd be mega-excited to brainstorm something with you, or even just act as idea-bouncer/general begger upon demand! :D
It would be nice.. if - even if Kadaj remained special to Loz and Yazoo - they learnt to trust Cloud for himself, and not just on Kadaj's instructions. And I think a family - one that are capable yet also somewhat dependant - if only emotionally - would be good for Cloud.
After all, you CAN have a lone Wolf.. but wolves tend to prefer packs.. :D
(I already found it sweet that Cloud's 'pack' including Tifa and Denzel (and, you never know, maybe his other friends too) had little Wolf rings on them.) )
My sincere thanks for writing this. It put into words exactly what Ive been searching for.