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12/19/2019 c39 KathyBk
Loved this... An amazing piece of work.
11/5/2019 c1 anonyme
Won't the blood adoption replace his previous family tie? I mean will he lose the sharingan ? And how are the narutoverse and the harry potter world connected? the standard "hidden continent" (i hope not), another plane of existence ? Dimension travel ? And why was sasuke send at that time? isn't the massacre when he is ~7 years old ? What happened ?
So many question, so many possibilities, i'm giddy. I'm looking forward to read next
11/5/2019 c39 31SapphireKageKyuura
I loved this story a lot, and I found it highly amusing how Harry continuously beat Orochimaru's ass. It was the most amusing thing I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
9/29/2019 c12 Guest
But Sasuke didn't come toilet trained.
9/22/2019 c33 Guest
I just want you those people who told you that were completely wrong, and that I feel bad that that happened, I know what that's like. Also I love you story I'm still not at writing multi person conversations any tips? I also struggle with changing from one characters perspective to another, and really getting a personality down for a character.
9/22/2019 c4 Guest
I like the story so far, but the formatting could use some work. It doesn't need to be anything too fancy, just a line, a dot (anything really) that marks the end of one scene and the beginning of the next. Like this:

" "Oh joy. And I thought today couldn't get any worse!" Harry dragged himself after the laughing Auror.

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"He's gorgeous Harry!" "

Well, at least that's my preference. I just think that without anything marking the change in scene it just looks a bit messy and the first sentence of the new scene doesn't always translate the way it should, because the brain is still focused on the previous scene.
9/22/2019 c39 Fallow56
xxxxx KUDOS xxxxx : )
9/13/2019 c39 skyeza
Beautifully done..
9/6/2019 c39 hgdtfhjtj
thanks
7/2/2019 c39 1Jimbocous
Nice one. Thanks!
6/29/2019 c5 Guest
I’m sorry but this is the most confusing story I’ve ever tried to read.
6/17/2019 c39 kirsty21
cool
6/11/2019 c39 annamccallen
This was so so amazing!?
6/3/2019 c39 SomeoneWithTasteDoA
Feels like you rushed it for the last few chapters. The story progressed relatively naturally, and then all of a sudden it was nuclear armageddon. Then Harry met Death/Kami and you hinted at things that you obviously had no intention of doing anything with.

Over all, a rather poor showing. It's a Naruto/HP crossover, so I knew coming in it would be pretty average, if not bad. Shame. Maybe one day someone will actually write something for this crossover that isn't a mess.
5/7/2019 c39 Ash Lee
OMG this was amazing! So GOOD!
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