for Unwritten11/22/2008 c1 
49bitchboughtmycookie
I liked that :) It was good :)
P.S. I've recently been watching Ouran High School Host Club. My sides have been hurting with laughter :D
49bitchboughtmycookieI liked that :) It was good :)
P.S. I've recently been watching Ouran High School Host Club. My sides have been hurting with laughter :D
6/21/2008 c2 6Kajikitsune8370
This is pretty good with Yuki having a murdous tone in his voice. I have never heard or read that before sure I've read him getting angry but not like that. Great story please update soon!
6Kajikitsune8370This is pretty good with Yuki having a murdous tone in his voice. I have never heard or read that before sure I've read him getting angry but not like that. Great story please update soon!
8/7/2007 c2 2Cyanide Saruwatari
This is realy good, cant wait for the next chapter
*adds to alert list*
xx
2Cyanide SaruwatariThis is realy good, cant wait for the next chapter
*adds to alert list*
xx
6/6/2006 c2 26MidnightxBluexBlack
This is pretty good so far, for the most part. You're kind of out of character in terms to Mine and Ayame's attitude, but other than that, you're going great (I'm assuming that there's reason behind Yuki's random aggressiveness). You're description is good, and from what I saw, spelling was great, too.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, so update soon.
26MidnightxBluexBlackThis is pretty good so far, for the most part. You're kind of out of character in terms to Mine and Ayame's attitude, but other than that, you're going great (I'm assuming that there's reason behind Yuki's random aggressiveness). You're description is good, and from what I saw, spelling was great, too.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, so update soon.
6/4/2006 c2 10923
Yep, it's pretty good! Keep it up- I love it! I can just see Ayame hiding behind Mine and Yuki quietly funing... Muwahahaha...teehee...heh
Yup, c'est bon.
love -little oro-
Yep, it's pretty good! Keep it up- I love it! I can just see Ayame hiding behind Mine and Yuki quietly funing... Muwahahaha...teehee...heh
Yup, c'est bon.
love -little oro-
5/27/2006 c2 46Twin Kats
This looks promising!
Plus it has Ayame!
XD
Keep up the good work!
TK
Twin Kats
46Twin KatsThis looks promising!
Plus it has Ayame!
XD
Keep up the good work!
TK
Twin Kats
5/22/2006 c2 2Sunshine Cove
Wow... I wish I could write like this! I absolutely LOVE this fic so far, please please PLEASE keep writing? You kindly reviewed to my fic (THANK YOU SO MUCH!) so I decided to check out your stuff. And I absolutely LOVE it, seriously. You keep everyone in such marvoulous character, again, I wish I could write like this. Seriously. Anyway, please keep writing, because I'll certainly keep reading!
2Sunshine CoveWow... I wish I could write like this! I absolutely LOVE this fic so far, please please PLEASE keep writing? You kindly reviewed to my fic (THANK YOU SO MUCH!) so I decided to check out your stuff. And I absolutely LOVE it, seriously. You keep everyone in such marvoulous character, again, I wish I could write like this. Seriously. Anyway, please keep writing, because I'll certainly keep reading!
5/21/2006 c2 39littlefiction
Sorry this took so long, I didn't realize there was already a chapter 2 :) I have been eagerly awaiting a chapter that is already up! (giggles) This chapter was also very good, and I look forward to the next! Oh, I can't wait to see Aaya and Gure-san in the same room!
39littlefictionSorry this took so long, I didn't realize there was already a chapter 2 :) I have been eagerly awaiting a chapter that is already up! (giggles) This chapter was also very good, and I look forward to the next! Oh, I can't wait to see Aaya and Gure-san in the same room!
5/20/2006 c1 littlefiction
Oh, this has disaster written all over it (leaving, not the story it self, you did great!)
Oh, this has disaster written all over it (leaving, not the story it self, you did great!)
5/20/2006 c1 Anon
Please continue
Please continue
5/19/2006 c1 1kitsune of the twin blades
yay i think it will b a gewd story! i love it when ayame acts all brotherly toward yuki!
1kitsune of the twin bladesyay i think it will b a gewd story! i love it when ayame acts all brotherly toward yuki!