for Unpredictable10/31/2014 c8 
21MPHknows
Correcting grammar mistakes does not mean someone dislikes the story. That just means they are trying to help you get better. You wont get anywhere with writing if you respond to constructive criticism that way.
If they were being rude about it, though, I understand the frustration.
MPHknows
21MPHknowsCorrecting grammar mistakes does not mean someone dislikes the story. That just means they are trying to help you get better. You wont get anywhere with writing if you respond to constructive criticism that way.
If they were being rude about it, though, I understand the frustration.
MPHknows
12/18/2010 c7 6Young at Heart21
Whats gonna happen when Padmé finds out? I have a feeling it won't end well. Your ideas are great keep it up!
6Young at Heart21Whats gonna happen when Padmé finds out? I have a feeling it won't end well. Your ideas are great keep it up!
4/8/2009 c7 20missambermariek
wow i really like this story and it seems to have alot of potential. i hope you update asap lol!
20missambermariekwow i really like this story and it seems to have alot of potential. i hope you update asap lol!
4/5/2009 c1 De Hunter
Your writing needs impronments to put it blatantly. Please learn how to spell Coruscant and remember to capitalize character's names.
Your writing needs impronments to put it blatantly. Please learn how to spell Coruscant and remember to capitalize character's names.
4/5/2009 c7 WETBOY
Great Chapter, keep it up and please update all your stories there GREAT/FANTASTIC and WONDERFUL!
Great Chapter, keep it up and please update all your stories there GREAT/FANTASTIC and WONDERFUL!
4/5/2009 c7 Jedi Angel001
It has been awhile since you updated.Poor Anakin.It seems like Bail hired them to beat Anakin up.Too bad Anakin could not use more of the Force to protect himself.
It has been awhile since you updated.Poor Anakin.It seems like Bail hired them to beat Anakin up.Too bad Anakin could not use more of the Force to protect himself.
12/20/2008 c7 Stunna21
good story so far but the fiance thing was a kick in the balls oh that's gotta hurt lol keep writing and update soon.
good story so far but the fiance thing was a kick in the balls oh that's gotta hurt lol keep writing and update soon.