for The Misplaced Potter 21/9/2023 c4 Guest
These students talk like they’re characters in some stuffy play. Not believable dialogue.
These students talk like they’re characters in some stuffy play. Not believable dialogue.
1/9/2023 c1 Guest
This Ron is much too smart.
This Ron is much too smart.
9/3/2021 c11 SpockST
I came across this late, so was able to read it in its entirety. I enjoyed it as an alternate Universe and would love to see "The Misplaced Potter 3" which shows Henry graduating, defeating Tom, and having a thriving, up-to-date magical/mundane community while seeing the old magical only community stagnate and slowly die.
I came across this late, so was able to read it in its entirety. I enjoyed it as an alternate Universe and would love to see "The Misplaced Potter 3" which shows Henry graduating, defeating Tom, and having a thriving, up-to-date magical/mundane community while seeing the old magical only community stagnate and slowly die.
1/7/2021 c11 mumphie
A lot of time has passed. I hope that someday you will find the muse to set your mojo on fire for more of your hobby of writing fanfiction, and specifically this story. It's very good and unique in the millions of stories out there. I've enjoyed it immensely. Thank you.
A lot of time has passed. I hope that someday you will find the muse to set your mojo on fire for more of your hobby of writing fanfiction, and specifically this story. It's very good and unique in the millions of stories out there. I've enjoyed it immensely. Thank you.
1/7/2021 c8 mumphie
"...he was the one on who to bet..."
I know you really don't care at this late date on whether it is who or whom that should be used in the sentence. Just wanted to say that even though I have been a teacher, I never really understood all the blather people/sites would go on and on about. It was decades after graduating that I found an easy way, and wondered why on earth no one used it in grade school.
So simple. You use who when the person you want to refer to would be a he or she. Whom is used when that person would be a him or her. So to the above partial sentence - who/whom was the one to bet on? I want to bet on him. It does sound strange in this particular sentence, but no one would say I want to bet on he. I know this story is ancient history so it really doesn't matter. ;)
"...he was the one on who to bet..."
I know you really don't care at this late date on whether it is who or whom that should be used in the sentence. Just wanted to say that even though I have been a teacher, I never really understood all the blather people/sites would go on and on about. It was decades after graduating that I found an easy way, and wondered why on earth no one used it in grade school.
So simple. You use who when the person you want to refer to would be a he or she. Whom is used when that person would be a him or her. So to the above partial sentence - who/whom was the one to bet on? I want to bet on him. It does sound strange in this particular sentence, but no one would say I want to bet on he. I know this story is ancient history so it really doesn't matter. ;)
1/6/2021 c2 mumphie
Not liking Maggie's insecurities forcing a bonding at 14. Rather young to force that and rather selfish of her to deny him the ability to show how he feels about her possibly being sterile.
Not liking Maggie's insecurities forcing a bonding at 14. Rather young to force that and rather selfish of her to deny him the ability to show how he feels about her possibly being sterile.
12/25/2020 c11 IloveHeat
This was excellent. I have read a LOT of HP fiction and have never seen it go in this direction. Now my imagination will have to fill in the future. And it looks bright. Thank you for a wonderful story
This was excellent. I have read a LOT of HP fiction and have never seen it go in this direction. Now my imagination will have to fill in the future. And it looks bright. Thank you for a wonderful story
6/23/2019 c11 mab70
Such a lovely story!
I dearly wish there was more!
Thank you for sharing your talent!
Such a lovely story!
I dearly wish there was more!
Thank you for sharing your talent!
4/29/2018 c11 
4viningc
The Misplaced Potter 2, Chapter 11:
I just recently found your stories and have finally finished reading this, the second in the series. I am not familiar with your genesis, but, from reading the story have a feeling that either English is not your primary language or you are quite young. It matters not to me if either is true or not, just that I mostly enjoyed your stories.
I would love to see this series resurrected and a "The Misplaced Potter 3" published. It would be quite an effort, because everything would be different. You would basically be writing an entirely new chapter in the Harry Potter universe.
I don't know your circumstances right now, but would enjoy helping in whatever small capacity I could if it would encourage you to continue.
Best of luck in whatever life throws your way. :)
4viningcThe Misplaced Potter 2, Chapter 11:
I just recently found your stories and have finally finished reading this, the second in the series. I am not familiar with your genesis, but, from reading the story have a feeling that either English is not your primary language or you are quite young. It matters not to me if either is true or not, just that I mostly enjoyed your stories.
I would love to see this series resurrected and a "The Misplaced Potter 3" published. It would be quite an effort, because everything would be different. You would basically be writing an entirely new chapter in the Harry Potter universe.
I don't know your circumstances right now, but would enjoy helping in whatever small capacity I could if it would encourage you to continue.
Best of luck in whatever life throws your way. :)
8/13/2017 c1 KMH1
Thanks for sharing your time and talent. Great characters, plot and ideas. I'm curious as to where Henry's parents are at the end. It would be wonderful to read another installment.
Thanks for sharing your time and talent. Great characters, plot and ideas. I'm curious as to where Henry's parents are at the end. It would be wonderful to read another installment.