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7/18/2006 c1 slamn
kool...an oc...don't normally like em but dis 1 is gr8
5/28/2006 c1 Rotted Chains
One thing I was wondering about...she's in her sixth year and yet she's only fifteen? Seeing as age determines when a person is permitted to attend Hogwarts, she should either be in her fifth year or should be sixteen years old.

Besides that, I don't see anything particularly wrong with it. Just make sure she doesn't turn into a Mary Sue, eh? The chapter, albeit short, is written well and I don't have any real criticisms.

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