
12/15/2016 c1 Tutanchanup
Hahahaha! This was simply hilarious! I had a hard time trying not to burst into loud laughter while in a tramway (public transport), but about the line "I want to have your baby!" my efforts proved futile ;-D
Hahahaha! This was simply hilarious! I had a hard time trying not to burst into loud laughter while in a tramway (public transport), but about the line "I want to have your baby!" my efforts proved futile ;-D
1/1/2013 c1
13EwigeStudentin
Oh My God! Hilarious! And such a cute twist in the end! I think I can hear V scream, even all these years later :p

Oh My God! Hilarious! And such a cute twist in the end! I think I can hear V scream, even all these years later :p
12/15/2010 c1
709804590604
Lol, a Mary Sue and a sidekick? Two VforV chiches that I hate, as well. Don't blame the guy. XD Nicely done.

Lol, a Mary Sue and a sidekick? Two VforV chiches that I hate, as well. Don't blame the guy. XD Nicely done.
9/28/2010 c1 thisacchasbeenabandoned
HAHAHAHAHA I bet he freaked out! Nice one, and I really love the ending :DD
HAHAHAHAHA I bet he freaked out! Nice one, and I really love the ending :DD
5/9/2008 c1
3BlaqueCat13
heh heh...is that the "dream blonde"? Is Evey tied up and locked in her cell?

heh heh...is that the "dream blonde"? Is Evey tied up and locked in her cell?
4/23/2008 c1
25Anya Magera
*Sits gaping, then in rapt, before laughing and promptly goes rolling around the floor.*
AAH! It's the attack of the mobbing fan girls! *Suddenly becomes serious* Although with his physique, I don't think I would mind seeing him naked... *trails off as a dreamy look comes into her eyes, then starts and looks around in extreme embarrassment as V suddenly turns in complete astonishment. Anya runs behind a corner to hide, her head pokes out a few moments to see he hasn't moved.*
Great story! Had a friend read it and she was cracking up as well. Keep up the good work!

*Sits gaping, then in rapt, before laughing and promptly goes rolling around the floor.*
AAH! It's the attack of the mobbing fan girls! *Suddenly becomes serious* Although with his physique, I don't think I would mind seeing him naked... *trails off as a dreamy look comes into her eyes, then starts and looks around in extreme embarrassment as V suddenly turns in complete astonishment. Anya runs behind a corner to hide, her head pokes out a few moments to see he hasn't moved.*
Great story! Had a friend read it and she was cracking up as well. Keep up the good work!
11/8/2006 c1
8dog youkai jane
OMG! !
*is now currently rolling on the floor laughing her head off* WHERE DID YOU GET THIS IDEA? omg, it is so funny. omg, i feel so bad for V. if i saw that happening to that poor man, i would chase those damn fan girls, (espesialy the one that said that she wanted to have his baby,)and beat them to a pulp, all the while lecturing them about how V has enough on his plate without some stupid whores chasing him, wanting to have his babies. then after i was finished that, if he was still their, i would apologize for there horrible behavior, and try to convince him that not all women are like that. then i would leave him, dragging the whores behind me. if he asked me to come with him to chat, i would go, even though what i lectured the girls would mean that i should do the compleat oppisite. i feel realy sorry for him, and pity him. LOVE IT! (but then again, i like all your stories...)

OMG! !
*is now currently rolling on the floor laughing her head off* WHERE DID YOU GET THIS IDEA? omg, it is so funny. omg, i feel so bad for V. if i saw that happening to that poor man, i would chase those damn fan girls, (espesialy the one that said that she wanted to have his baby,)and beat them to a pulp, all the while lecturing them about how V has enough on his plate without some stupid whores chasing him, wanting to have his babies. then after i was finished that, if he was still their, i would apologize for there horrible behavior, and try to convince him that not all women are like that. then i would leave him, dragging the whores behind me. if he asked me to come with him to chat, i would go, even though what i lectured the girls would mean that i should do the compleat oppisite. i feel realy sorry for him, and pity him. LOVE IT! (but then again, i like all your stories...)
8/11/2006 c1 873833
Hahaha lol that was hilarious. I would be right at the front of that screaming crowd of fangirls picking up his clothes lol!
Sami ~x♥x~
Hahaha lol that was hilarious. I would be right at the front of that screaming crowd of fangirls picking up his clothes lol!
Sami ~x♥x~
6/28/2006 c1 kal
LOL. Very, very funny...:)
LOL. Very, very funny...:)
6/6/2006 c1 apenamee
You surprised me with that one!
You surprised me with that one!