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9/30/2008 c1 1Mosesthesecond
nice plot but im sorry i really dont understand. :(
6/13/2007 c2 this account will be dead soon
...This reminds me of the old Batman show, cheesy, can't understand a thing, and annoying as all get out...

Good god, I think my brain cells are rotting out...
6/17/2006 c5 7horsefly
The first chapter was almost unreadable but you have DEFINTELY improved on grammar and spelling. The story itself is ok. It’s not my personal favorite but you’ve obviously put a lot of work into thinking up some interesting ideas. It’s hard to write such a complicated story and not have it be too confusing. The story HAS gotten a little less confusing as it’s gone along but maybe you could do a short “re-cap” so everyone knows EXACTLY what has happened. Just a suggestion :-)

Would the “monster” be a Dalek? Whisk-like object - that is kind of what it looks like! Weird! My Dad has a "behind the scenes" book about Star Trek that mentioned that some of the devices in the Med bay were actually salt shakers! Just an interesting fact for you!
6/17/2006 c5 1Eroll
This is looking brilliant. The layout is much better, and the grammar has improved which is good, and the story is still excellent! Torchwood! And I really like the bit at the end with poor old Margaret dying. Very descriptive. This story has changed its plotline a lot, but I'm willing to see where it goes...
6/14/2006 c4 Eroll
OK, that is too harsh. I thought reviews were supposed to be constructive, not just plain slagging off. I think this is a great idea. Yes, it is hard to read and the spag isn't so good, but who really cares? There's more to life than grammar. It's Man-of-the-forest's story, so he can make the Doctor do whatever he wants him to, and maybe the Doctor had a secondary plan for getting Ace out that involved running away? Sometimes running is good.

I like this story, I think it is a brilliant idea. Yes, I know I've said it before, but I'll say it again, it is a brilliant idea. I like how stuff from the series has been integrated, and Jackie's dialect used. I'm a bit confused over the change of title, I preferred the other one, but apart from that, continue as planned please!
6/6/2006 c3 xxHPFan
that was a bit harsh *points to mean review below*

ok, so the punctuation isn't all that great, but the idea is really good, and its interesting to read. i like it!
6/6/2006 c1 6BigBlueBox
I'm sorry, but I have to agree. It has potential, but I find it cheesy, slightly annoying and very badly characterised. I also didn't get why the Master chased the Doctor, wouldn't he have just shot Ace instead? If Ace or any of his other companions were being threatened, The Doctor'd do something with a rather spectacular edge to his voice. He would not run from the room, leaving all his companions alone with an evil guy with a gun, for any reason, even if it was to get him out the room.

Sorry, that's just my personal opinion.
6/6/2006 c1 Truthisbrutal
All the hallmarks of bad fanfiction - switching between tenses, punctuation errors throughout, poor characterisation, author's notes right in the middle of the story, characters showing up with no good reason.. need I go on? Unreadable. Go back and try again.
6/5/2006 c2 1Eroll
Be nice to The Master? But he's a mainpulative, part-cat, evil, renegade Time Lord who wants to rule the universe. Yeah, I suppose he is pretty cool...

Anyway, this is such a cool idea. It's just the sort of thing the MAster would think up, and it's really imaginative. Yet again, the spelling leaves a bit to be desired, but who really cares? This is great. May I say, "Go Polly!", she's one of my favourite companions, though where's Ben? And a world ruled by Queen Ace? That would be so cool...
6/4/2006 c1 xxHPFan
this is a great start, i can't wait to read the next part, although you need to watch your spelling of Sarah-Jane, its Sarah, not Sharah, sorry im just being picky!
6/4/2006 c1 wolverbunny
ACK!

Please,be nice with The Master...

He is one of my fave Dr.Who characters...

But,you can kill Rose off all you wanna...

CHEERS!

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