for Yin & Yang Demoness12/3/2006 c2 
9Koorika
Hi! I have some advice. Stop jumbling your story together
so much. It makes it hard to read. It's a good story,
though. I like it. I hope that I didn't offend you.
Update quickly, please. That's all, bye.
9KoorikaHi! I have some advice. Stop jumbling your story together
so much. It makes it hard to read. It's a good story,
though. I like it. I hope that I didn't offend you.
Update quickly, please. That's all, bye.
6/10/2006 c1 MM
okay i started reading and i need to finish it so u better write the rest. thanks bye
okay i started reading and i need to finish it so u better write the rest. thanks bye