for Not as they seem1/19/2016 c1 sanbeegoldiewhitey
This chapter seemed written by Blaugrana al-vent, the foremost exponent of punching- bag Harry story. What kind of wizard gives up his wand and chooses his books? Such a moronic idiot your Harry was. Since this was written in 2006, it is obvious all you know is how to write angst. This is the most terrible chapter I have read in all of fan fiction. If you have any shame, you should delete this masochistic chapter. Gosh, you could not even spell Hedwig correctly.
This chapter seemed written by Blaugrana al-vent, the foremost exponent of punching- bag Harry story. What kind of wizard gives up his wand and chooses his books? Such a moronic idiot your Harry was. Since this was written in 2006, it is obvious all you know is how to write angst. This is the most terrible chapter I have read in all of fan fiction. If you have any shame, you should delete this masochistic chapter. Gosh, you could not even spell Hedwig correctly.
7/13/2006 c1 anony
Interesting start, but there are a few problems. First, I think the Order will be expecting more than just letters. They will be looking for signs of a happy, or at least, well taken care of, Harry. Second, the wand snapping would certainly bring problems to the Dursleys once school starts.
Admittedly the title is a clue that the reader should be very aware that what is read may not be what is really going on.
Anyhow, there isn't much more I can say other than keep on writing and I hope to see more soon.
Interesting start, but there are a few problems. First, I think the Order will be expecting more than just letters. They will be looking for signs of a happy, or at least, well taken care of, Harry. Second, the wand snapping would certainly bring problems to the Dursleys once school starts.
Admittedly the title is a clue that the reader should be very aware that what is read may not be what is really going on.
Anyhow, there isn't much more I can say other than keep on writing and I hope to see more soon.
7/5/2006 c1 LA LA
good story but you should continue to work on tools are meant for labor
good story but you should continue to work on tools are meant for labor
6/29/2006 c1 mellyone
I'm very interested to see where you take this story. You really must update this, the only thing I saw wrong was Hedwig's name spelled wrong but other than that it was good. Update soon.
I'm very interested to see where you take this story. You really must update this, the only thing I saw wrong was Hedwig's name spelled wrong but other than that it was good. Update soon.
6/9/2006 c1 
5SphinxJinx
it sounds really good so far. but, heres a pointer, its Hedwig. Not Hedgewig. that annoyed me.
but meh. keep writing! sphinxgurl
5SphinxJinxit sounds really good so far. but, heres a pointer, its Hedwig. Not Hedgewig. that annoyed me.
but meh. keep writing! sphinxgurl