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1/19/2016 c1 sanbeegoldiewhitey
This chapter seemed written by Blaugrana al-vent, the foremost exponent of punching- bag Harry story. What kind of wizard gives up his wand and chooses his books? Such a moronic idiot your Harry was. Since this was written in 2006, it is obvious all you know is how to write angst. This is the most terrible chapter I have read in all of fan fiction. If you have any shame, you should delete this masochistic chapter. Gosh, you could not even spell Hedwig correctly.
7/13/2006 c1 anony
Interesting start, but there are a few problems. First, I think the Order will be expecting more than just letters. They will be looking for signs of a happy, or at least, well taken care of, Harry. Second, the wand snapping would certainly bring problems to the Dursleys once school starts.

Admittedly the title is a clue that the reader should be very aware that what is read may not be what is really going on.

Anyhow, there isn't much more I can say other than keep on writing and I hope to see more soon.
7/5/2006 c1 LA LA
good story but you should continue to work on tools are meant for labor
6/29/2006 c1 mellyone
I'm very interested to see where you take this story. You really must update this, the only thing I saw wrong was Hedwig's name spelled wrong but other than that it was good. Update soon.
6/9/2006 c1 5SphinxJinx
it sounds really good so far. but, heres a pointer, its Hedwig. Not Hedgewig. that annoyed me.

but meh. keep writing! sphinxgurl
6/8/2006 c1 zombiewolf
looks good. update soon.

Your Lord and Master

~Zombie Wolf

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