
7/9/2008 c1
71DaiHelsing
Yay, the first chapter is great;). I like it. Jack's awesome, isn't he? Yay. I like such a rebellious characters like CJ.

Yay, the first chapter is great;). I like it. Jack's awesome, isn't he? Yay. I like such a rebellious characters like CJ.
6/5/2008 c16
2xBrokenDreamerx
holy shit no way i cant believe that they are getting together for real now and not to mention going back to the mercers where jack is. this should be good update soon XD

holy shit no way i cant believe that they are getting together for real now and not to mention going back to the mercers where jack is. this should be good update soon XD
6/5/2008 c16 Kaite-Kat Sam
VICTORIA! HER NAME IS VICTORIA!1...i think anyway lol.
*sing song voice* loved it!
update as soon as you can
xxo
Sam
VICTORIA! HER NAME IS VICTORIA!1...i think anyway lol.
*sing song voice* loved it!
update as soon as you can
xxo
Sam
4/13/2008 c15 punchdrunktrue
LOVED IT!
Update as soon as possible. I'm running blank on ideas here now though...sorry.
LOVED IT!
Update as soon as possible. I'm running blank on ideas here now though...sorry.
4/10/2008 c15 xBrokenDreamerx
holy shit thats all i have to say lol. i so did not see that one coming. i cant wait to see what happened with jack and carmen after they left and came back lol. i'm sure it should be interesting. i wonder just who will be the one to find her and take her home. update soon XD
holy shit thats all i have to say lol. i so did not see that one coming. i cant wait to see what happened with jack and carmen after they left and came back lol. i'm sure it should be interesting. i wonder just who will be the one to find her and take her home. update soon XD
4/10/2008 c15
4XNegAttentionX
Okay, so she kind of redeemed herself, but I still don't like her lmao (aren't I so nice?)
Poor Bobby...But obv. you aren't gonna leave him all broken hearted (not that he'd admit it) are you?
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Okay, so she kind of redeemed herself, but I still don't like her lmao (aren't I so nice?)
Poor Bobby...But obv. you aren't gonna leave him all broken hearted (not that he'd admit it) are you?
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4/9/2008 c14 HermioneandMarcus
Great story i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon as you can please
Great story i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon as you can please
3/9/2008 c14 XNegAttentionX
lalalalalala...still hate carmen (sorry!) jack's too good for her! LMAO, she def. needs to be with Bobby!
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lalalalalala...still hate carmen (sorry!) jack's too good for her! LMAO, she def. needs to be with Bobby!
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3/7/2008 c14 Sam
I'm too lazy to sign in right now but if you don't know who the fuck this is ill have to shoot you.
Its good,update soon.
(P.S: happy now?)
I'm too lazy to sign in right now but if you don't know who the fuck this is ill have to shoot you.
Its good,update soon.
(P.S: happy now?)
3/7/2008 c14
2xBrokenDreamerx
wow i think that this chapter turned out rather nicely if i do say so myself. i like the twist that you added at the end very dramatic. i wonder where you're gonna take this one. update soon XD

wow i think that this chapter turned out rather nicely if i do say so myself. i like the twist that you added at the end very dramatic. i wonder where you're gonna take this one. update soon XD
2/27/2008 c13 Sarah
I LOVE this story!
I LOVE this story!
2/27/2008 c13 punchdrunktrue
Now see i'm mad at you. I checked my e-mail and saw an update for this and i got excited that it was something new. BUT I ALREADY READ MOST OF THIS! So now my dreams and hopes are crushed. I hope your happy. :(
Lots of love, Sam
Now see i'm mad at you. I checked my e-mail and saw an update for this and i got excited that it was something new. BUT I ALREADY READ MOST OF THIS! So now my dreams and hopes are crushed. I hope your happy. :(
Lots of love, Sam
2/25/2008 c13
2xBrokenDreamerx
well it was still a good update even though i read it previously lol. i cant wait to see where you take it. email me if you need help. update soon XD

well it was still a good update even though i read it previously lol. i cant wait to see where you take it. email me if you need help. update soon XD