
2/13/2010 c1
111The Layman
Awe, that's cute. There were many missing parenthases (and for the record, it's "samurai", like "sheep" or "deer") but for the most part it sounded like RuroKen.

Awe, that's cute. There were many missing parenthases (and for the record, it's "samurai", like "sheep" or "deer") but for the most part it sounded like RuroKen.
12/13/2007 c1
10LambSam
This is ok, I guess. I think it would have been better if there wasn't any author notes inside the story.

This is ok, I guess. I think it would have been better if there wasn't any author notes inside the story.
2/25/2007 c1
4Keniichi
aw so sweet, you did a good job with yahiko and kenshin together. dad, and son cool, sort of.

aw so sweet, you did a good job with yahiko and kenshin together. dad, and son cool, sort of.
6/15/2006 c1
1akisu-san
i see you've managed to upload a fanfic? Yay! i'm just glad my instructions weren't confusing...hopefully...anyways, good job on your fic, i thought it was so cute!

i see you've managed to upload a fanfic? Yay! i'm just glad my instructions weren't confusing...hopefully...anyways, good job on your fic, i thought it was so cute!
6/13/2006 c1
84DesertRose3000
I think it's good to show Kenshin as a father figure to Yahiko. Indeed, that's how I've always seen him. He kinda sees Yahiko as his adopted son. We see this more after the Kyoto Arc ends. Kenshin and Yahiko's relationship deepens into more of a father/son relationship.
My only criticism is it's generally not a good idea to inject author's notes into the story, as it disrupts the flow.

I think it's good to show Kenshin as a father figure to Yahiko. Indeed, that's how I've always seen him. He kinda sees Yahiko as his adopted son. We see this more after the Kyoto Arc ends. Kenshin and Yahiko's relationship deepens into more of a father/son relationship.
My only criticism is it's generally not a good idea to inject author's notes into the story, as it disrupts the flow.
6/13/2006 c1
3KaoruKamiya307
Aw...how cute! I love it! You did a good job of staying in character! Tears were starting to form in my eyes at the cuteness! I love Kenshin/Yahiko fics where they are like father/son! A job well done I must say! Continue writing!

Aw...how cute! I love it! You did a good job of staying in character! Tears were starting to form in my eyes at the cuteness! I love Kenshin/Yahiko fics where they are like father/son! A job well done I must say! Continue writing!