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6/18/2006 c1 32griiffins
This is great! Brilliantly written and very emotional. Just what I like in a Claire/Charlie fanfic! It's going on the faves! Update soon please!
6/13/2006 c1 25La'Ruelia
Good story! I liked it alot. Sorry about it not getting many reviews, I hope it picks up. But a good story isn't just decided about how many reviews.

Your mom eats fried chicken. Did you put that in as a inside joke? I like that line alot!

Have fun in New York!

-Naomi
6/13/2006 c1 50Spice of Life
Ah, I loved it! Was that all of it? Will there be more? I really loved the whole 'YOUR MOM EATS FRIED CHICKEN' thing, that really made me laugh. Nice job!
6/13/2006 c1 95pacejunkie
Hey that was great! My favourite part was the flashbacks. The story of how they got their name was really creative. Also, how could you ever go wrong with a shirtless Charlie? I wished it were all a bit longer. Good job.
6/13/2006 c1 60jankmusic
Okay...Starting from the beginning.

I liked it! The entire concept of the story with flashbacks and everything is written well, and it flows...Can't forget that. :)

Loving the quotes too. Keep up the good work, and update soon.

Have a Nice Day!

-Bob Bennit

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