6/18/2006 c4 INACTIVEACCOUNT243095
I seriously thought this whole story was a joke. Maybe your hint should be the fact that you have one review out of 4 chapters (from a person who obviously has low standards when it comes to writing). Do us all a favor and delete it.
Some people have no business writing-you're one of them. The punctuation is BAD, the characters are one dimensional, and the story is far from developed.
I seriously thought this whole story was a joke. Maybe your hint should be the fact that you have one review out of 4 chapters (from a person who obviously has low standards when it comes to writing). Do us all a favor and delete it.
Some people have no business writing-you're one of them. The punctuation is BAD, the characters are one dimensional, and the story is far from developed.
6/16/2006 c4 Lexi
aw no more brathan!its still really good! ud soon!
aw no more brathan!its still really good! ud soon!