for The Proposal of the Year12/29/2008 c1 
6BrucasLoveX
Poor Brooke, so sad the way she found out!
Cant wait to read the next chapter!
6BrucasLoveXPoor Brooke, so sad the way she found out!
Cant wait to read the next chapter!
11/7/2006 c2 somewhereonlyiknow
"Wow um okay everyone who was at the cabin said"
Gee, nice to see they care about Luke so much that they'd say 'wow um okay' when they hear he has a potentially fatal disease.
"Wow um okay everyone who was at the cabin said"
Gee, nice to see they care about Luke so much that they'd say 'wow um okay' when they hear he has a potentially fatal disease.
7/14/2006 c1 6floveit
Maybe if you wrote it in story format ,more people would like it. I hav'nt actually read it cos i hate Pathan lol but umm i was just checking stories out and i thought i'd check this one out too, so yeah i think you should do that. Maybe it'll help. =]
6floveitMaybe if you wrote it in story format ,more people would like it. I hav'nt actually read it cos i hate Pathan lol but umm i was just checking stories out and i thought i'd check this one out too, so yeah i think you should do that. Maybe it'll help. =]
7/14/2006 c1 8spikesmisty
I have to agree with some of the other reviewers. If you changed a lot of this. added more action and put quotes around things they say maybe you'll have a good story.
8spikesmistyI have to agree with some of the other reviewers. If you changed a lot of this. added more action and put quotes around things they say maybe you'll have a good story.
6/28/2006 c3 INACTIVEACCOUNT243095
sadly, i have to agree witht he other two people who diond't like this. this isn't a story, it's a vague extrememly poorly developed list of nonsense. why would you post something like this? it doesn't even seem like you wanted to write!
sadly, i have to agree witht he other two people who diond't like this. this isn't a story, it's a vague extrememly poorly developed list of nonsense. why would you post something like this? it doesn't even seem like you wanted to write!
6/25/2006 c2 13Fanpire109
please update again soon that was good i'm a little confused but that was good
13Fanpire109please update again soon that was good i'm a little confused but that was good