for WHAT'S HAPPENING TO ME!3/22/2018 c20 Guest
Why use all that slur? I'm not gay but that's really disrespectful
Why use all that slur? I'm not gay but that's really disrespectful
3/22/2015 c21 
31SapphireKageKyuura
OMG I loved this story! I even loved the part where Naruto killed Sakura! :D
31SapphireKageKyuuraOMG I loved this story! I even loved the part where Naruto killed Sakura! :D
12/22/2014 c9 misakixusagi1021
3...2...1...SOUL EATER NOSEBLEED! *nosebleeds* / Keep up the good work! /;/
3...2...1...SOUL EATER NOSEBLEED! *nosebleeds* / Keep up the good work! /;/
12/22/2014 c7 misakixusagi1021
I'm crying right now! T-TT I feel like sending Sakura to the TITANIC and letting her drown! Q-Q
I'm crying right now! T-TT I feel like sending Sakura to the TITANIC and letting her drown! Q-Q
1/5/2013 c1 1RmeGamr
k before i say anything else, i do like the storyline and the stuff you have set up. However... have you even had this thing beta'd? because im about to cry with all the mistakes im seeing. i would really like to read it but i cant when there are so many mistakes that take away from the quality of the story. if you need i beta i can do it for you, or please find another beta to work with you. this would be so much better if you could fix your mistakes and contradictions. ill put this in my favorites so that i can come back to it and see how it has improved. i look forward to it!
1RmeGamrk before i say anything else, i do like the storyline and the stuff you have set up. However... have you even had this thing beta'd? because im about to cry with all the mistakes im seeing. i would really like to read it but i cant when there are so many mistakes that take away from the quality of the story. if you need i beta i can do it for you, or please find another beta to work with you. this would be so much better if you could fix your mistakes and contradictions. ill put this in my favorites so that i can come back to it and see how it has improved. i look forward to it!
4/27/2012 c2 hai
awesome idea for a story but wow...the grammar is horrendous.
awesome idea for a story but wow...the grammar is horrendous.
5/23/2011 c1 Yaoi es passion
This story was so worth reading. Thank you for killing Sakura no aguanto a esa puta ella es un lambe culo. Thanks for writing this good story :D
This story was so worth reading. Thank you for killing Sakura no aguanto a esa puta ella es un lambe culo. Thanks for writing this good story :D
8/18/2010 c9 Satsuki20
So hot O But Sakura should die for ruining Sasuke's and Naruto's relationship. *Takes out a reaper's scythe and heads to Sakura's house to send her to hell*
So hot O But Sakura should die for ruining Sasuke's and Naruto's relationship. *Takes out a reaper's scythe and heads to Sakura's house to send her to hell*
7/9/2010 c18 AspergianStoryteller
For some reason, I can see Neji being the one freaked or gorssed out by a horror movie and Gaara taking it calmly.
For some reason, I can see Neji being the one freaked or gorssed out by a horror movie and Gaara taking it calmly.
7/9/2010 c5 AspergianStoryteller
Ne, Naruto doesn't know heaps about the enormaity of sexuality and label issues does he? Sometimes you cna't really put a simple label on something because it's too complicated or diverse.
Ne, Naruto doesn't know heaps about the enormaity of sexuality and label issues does he? Sometimes you cna't really put a simple label on something because it's too complicated or diverse.
7/8/2009 c19 It's easy
It's spelled 'Itadakimasu' just in case you don't know yet.
It's spelled 'Itadakimasu' just in case you don't know yet.
4/19/2008 c6 14Senorita TacoMal
Oh geez... I liked them both equally! Please don't hate me! I'm just curious to see how it's gonna go along now. I mean, on one version, then entire school knows their secret! And in the other, it's only Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, and possibly Kiba. NOW OFF TO CHAPTER 7! *charges in with giant battleaxe*
14Senorita TacoMalOh geez... I liked them both equally! Please don't hate me! I'm just curious to see how it's gonna go along now. I mean, on one version, then entire school knows their secret! And in the other, it's only Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, and possibly Kiba. NOW OFF TO CHAPTER 7! *charges in with giant battleaxe*
4/19/2008 c1 Senorita TacoMal
Awesome story! I only have a little criticism '^^ Near the beginning, when Sasuke loans Naruto his blazer, you keep switching from the third to the first person :) I think these are the only two:
"Naruto could feel a light blush creeping on my cheeks and looked away."
"“Thanks,” Naruto said clumsily as I slipped it on."
Okay, I'm gonna go read chapter 2 now! Ja ne!
Awesome story! I only have a little criticism '^^ Near the beginning, when Sasuke loans Naruto his blazer, you keep switching from the third to the first person :) I think these are the only two:
"Naruto could feel a light blush creeping on my cheeks and looked away."
"“Thanks,” Naruto said clumsily as I slipped it on."
Okay, I'm gonna go read chapter 2 now! Ja ne!