for Mannerisms8/25/2013 c1 Guest
I have one word for this: AMAZING!
I have one word for this: AMAZING!
2/23/2011 c1 
7Naruhina7799
SQUEEEE! Whats not to love about Mori? Nothing! This was so cute! "Hunny loved it when Takashi smiled" was just something that everyone loves! WHo doesn't love that rare smile? 3 3 3
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7Naruhina7799SQUEEEE! Whats not to love about Mori? Nothing! This was so cute! "Hunny loved it when Takashi smiled" was just something that everyone loves! WHo doesn't love that rare smile? 3 3 3
-3-
4/14/2008 c1 Apples n Oranges
This is very cute. Excellent job, really. I didn't find any spelling errors or anything. I read a bit of your other fanfiction, and you have fantastic characterization skills.
Keep up the good work.
This is very cute. Excellent job, really. I didn't find any spelling errors or anything. I read a bit of your other fanfiction, and you have fantastic characterization skills.
Keep up the good work.
3/18/2008 c1 3The Paper Dragon
yay for fluff! it makes the world go `round and there really isn't enough of this paring...
3The Paper Dragonyay for fluff! it makes the world go `round and there really isn't enough of this paring...
12/6/2007 c1 8The Little Cog Girl
Because you asked for corrections you droped ing from be in adored "...Takashi for always be by his side...". This fic is realy sweet!
8The Little Cog GirlBecause you asked for corrections you droped ing from be in adored "...Takashi for always be by his side...". This fic is realy sweet!
8/7/2007 c1 2Cyanide Saruwatari
*squeals like the obssessive fangirl we all know i am*
This is so cute!
write more HunnyxMori!
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2Cyanide Saruwatari*squeals like the obssessive fangirl we all know i am*
This is so cute!
write more HunnyxMori!
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6/8/2007 c1 5xKuroHinotex
Impressive =]
You're a very excellent author.
That's rarely found on this site..
You really have a way with entwining words. Hats off to ya. ^^
~KuroHinote
5xKuroHinotexImpressive =]
You're a very excellent author.
That's rarely found on this site..
You really have a way with entwining words. Hats off to ya. ^^
~KuroHinote
6/3/2007 c1 3SmashedObsidianSky
that was beautiful! oh almost every line i had to pause and take in it's excellence! you're truely an excellent writer and really know how to make hunny ,and mori fangirls happy
3SmashedObsidianSkythat was beautiful! oh almost every line i had to pause and take in it's excellence! you're truely an excellent writer and really know how to make hunny ,and mori fangirls happy
3/5/2007 c1 40Micayasha
Oh, that was absolutely effing ADORABLE... And very much in character. It would be hard to write Hunny's point of view from first person, but your omniscent third person is perfect because you can give his opinions without writing in a childlike way.
Wonderful. Going on my Favorite Stories list. :)
40MicayashaOh, that was absolutely effing ADORABLE... And very much in character. It would be hard to write Hunny's point of view from first person, but your omniscent third person is perfect because you can give his opinions without writing in a childlike way.
Wonderful. Going on my Favorite Stories list. :)
2/9/2007 c1 3Unstable Miharu
*swells with fangirling fluff* |D That was so... awesome.
I LOVE the last line.
3Unstable Miharu*swells with fangirling fluff* |D That was so... awesome.
I LOVE the last line.