11/11/2007 c1 6alchemyarchetype
Oh! That was wonderful! Truly wonderful. You maintained Pinhead's disdain and character really spectacularly and Carl's process f luring his victim into his trap was just fantastic. Off to read your other stories now!
Oh! That was wonderful! Truly wonderful. You maintained Pinhead's disdain and character really spectacularly and Carl's process f luring his victim into his trap was just fantastic. Off to read your other stories now!
6/7/2007 c1 6VeryAbandonedAccount
*Slow smile curves lips* I'm impressed. It's rare that someone can write something so beautifully sadistic without acsidentally adding an atmosphere of disgust. Especially when the suffering goes on for more than a hundred words or so.
*Slow smile curves lips* I'm impressed. It's rare that someone can write something so beautifully sadistic without acsidentally adding an atmosphere of disgust. Especially when the suffering goes on for more than a hundred words or so.