for Inner Demons8/2/2022 c1 Guest
soooo good omg
soooo good omg
6/27/2022 c19 Guest
I liked the ending!
I liked the ending!
6/26/2022 c5 Guest
I think Sakura would be smart enough to figure out how to get rid of the poison, even if it required her using a lot of chakra. I doubt Kabuto’s medical skills exceed hers.
I think Sakura would be smart enough to figure out how to get rid of the poison, even if it required her using a lot of chakra. I doubt Kabuto’s medical skills exceed hers.
1/10/2022 c4 Guest
I like the story so far but you make her seem so weak
I like the story so far but you make her seem so weak
9/26/2021 c8 Guest
I suck at writing them too. Don't worry it's ok. It's also depressing! More Sasusaku and comedy!
I suck at writing them too. Don't worry it's ok. It's also depressing! More Sasusaku and comedy!
9/26/2021 c4 Rhylan
I'm going to guess neither neji or naruto
I'm going to guess neither neji or naruto
11/27/2019 c13 xMeimei
I don't like how you've portrayed Sakura. You make her seem extremely weak and just useless. All she has done in your story is cry and beg. It bugs me how sad you made her out to be. The plot is ok but your story lacks proper development
I don't like how you've portrayed Sakura. You make her seem extremely weak and just useless. All she has done in your story is cry and beg. It bugs me how sad you made her out to be. The plot is ok but your story lacks proper development
7/31/2019 c5 Guest
I love protective Saske. Also I’m glad he didn’t kill him. He’s a little bitch but he doesn’t want to kill his friends
I love protective Saske. Also I’m glad he didn’t kill him. He’s a little bitch but he doesn’t want to kill his friends
7/30/2019 c2 Guest
THAT BITCH
THAT BITCH
7/11/2019 c1 xMeimei
First of all, it's Orochimaru not Orachimaru. And the plot seems alright, but you need to work on your grammar
First of all, it's Orochimaru not Orachimaru. And the plot seems alright, but you need to work on your grammar
2/16/2019 c19 AnimeLover
YASSSSSSS HALLALUJAH
YASSSSSSS HALLALUJAH
10/1/2018 c13 
1Sucker for shipping
I agree with you that she wouldn't win, but... SERIOUSLY! PLEASE DON'T MAKE HER WEAK AND CRY LIKE THAT! As much as I love her character, I hate seeing her weak!
1Sucker for shippingI agree with you that she wouldn't win, but... SERIOUSLY! PLEASE DON'T MAKE HER WEAK AND CRY LIKE THAT! As much as I love her character, I hate seeing her weak!
10/1/2018 c4 Sucker for shipping
Arrrgggghhh I hate it how she's strong, then suddenly degrades. MAJORLY.
Arrrgggghhh I hate it how she's strong, then suddenly degrades. MAJORLY.
10/1/2018 c1 Sucker for shipping
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9/13/2018 c6 KittyKatBoo
Yassss! I absolutely LOVED Sakura's moment of empowerment towards the end. This was a great chapter
Yassss! I absolutely LOVED Sakura's moment of empowerment towards the end. This was a great chapter